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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce23d
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    I wonder if Ajax, when he sees the characters in the Toei movies, will continue with his idea of following the direction of the plot since the presence of those individuals will make everything very confusing.

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    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce2mth
    Commented

    very good but there was no other story being published or was it my imagination?

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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce2mth
    Commented

    I was attracted to the story especially because of the theme of Hyperdimension Neptunia

    Ch 1 What the fuck is happening?
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    Memerdimension Neptunia: Checkmate Re;birth!
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Posted

    It's a good story, although the MC is somewhat distrustful, I'm sure he'll get over it after all, there is a Trunks who also traveled to the past and told what would happen, he could come up with a good excuse. Still, I'm excited for my favorite villain, "Cooler," to show up. Oh God, the design of him in his fifth form makes me want to kneel.

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    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
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    You know how Frieza is, once he sees things turn bad he will use an indiscriminate attack to blow up the planet. Any enemy in the later Frieza stage has the ability to blow up the planet. And since no one survives when the planet explodes, there would be no chance to resurrect.

    Ch 58 Chapter 58 – Pride and Mercy
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Commented

    Goku needs the ability to survive in the universe or a skill or technique that allows him to be in the universe for a time, might the Namek spheres be able to grant it or will he ask for something else?

    Ch 58 Chapter 58 – Pride and Mercy
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    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Replied to Equuleus_Nox

    It makes sense, but it would still be somewhat uneven if you take into account Frieza, who is a different race, although he was almost never seen trying to lift something so I can't say anything. But... humans on earth today already have some transport machines that can carry 1000 tons. And not to mention in the world of Dragon Ball, with Bulma a genius, didn't it occur to her to create machines that lift objects weighing thousands of tons and in a surprising moment... "BAM"! Enemies crushed!? All of this can be attributed a lot to the author of the franchise, with many inconsistencies, after all it was also shown that it is not his strong suit to create battle scenes or scenarios where destruction can be seen, at most just one destruction that affects a huge area or at most the planet. Like how the "Z" warriors increased their powers more than Goku, who was training at Kami-Sama's lookout for a long time after defeating Piccolo and not to mention that he spent a few months in the time room. . Although it can be accepted that they were able to overcome it because of how desperate they were or they tried many times more than Goku... But the problem is that Yajirobe surpassed Goku, with 970 and he doesn't even know how to use Ki. Oh the author...

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 – Vegeta, Suffering
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    Dragon Ball Alternative
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Commented

    I have some ideas, since ki can be condensed like a spinning saw to be thrown, or even like a ki sword, can't it be manipulated or molded to make protective armor like armament haki? You could also start creating a strike skill with internal destruction in case there is classic Broly. Just a suggestion.

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 – Vegeta, Suffering
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    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Commented

    The story is very good. Now that I think about it, there is something I don't understand... according to the Super Saiyan manga, Vegeta couldn't lift 1000 tons, but didn't Goku as a child with 10 tons of power lift a mini car with Bulma included at the beginning? That should weigh like a ton. Also, in case that scene isn't taken into account... Didn't Goku go to Kaiosama's planet training in clothes with a total weight of 100 kilos? with 10 times more gravity... wouldn't he be training with a total of a ton with only 416? Just like Piccolo launched a somewhat casual attack to destroy the moon, my god that energy should have traveled about a tenth the speed of light, but Piccolo's special cannon attack didn't despite being stronger? or does it only focus on impact damage?

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 – Vegeta, Suffering
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    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Commented

    Now that I think about it, in this universe, is the Ssj4 inferior to the ssj god (red) or superior?

    Ch 53 Chapter 53 – A Man’s Weakness
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce3mth
    Commented

    Although I know that Ajax wants to increase his strength, but is it necessary for him not to make Goku or perhaps other characters not become stronger according to his knowledge? Although I know that he doesn't want to expose his future knowledge, etc. But he somehow has the brains to figure it out, right? For example, at a later stage, saying that the Saiyan tail is an extreme measure to increase growth potential or something to gain access to SSJ4. Also help him teach him techniques that he thinks Goku will need in the future. But you'll see how you develop it, I'm just giving an opinion, don't take it too seriously.

    Ch 52 Chapter 52* – The Truth About Gohan
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce6mth
    Commented

    I could make Goku also receive the speed of the training but not now but in Namek

    I could wish for the dragon to boost another characters training speed. But he needs another 7 months to finish recharging. Other wise I will be yelling at rocks.
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    I was Reincarnated as Krillin? Oh boy.
    Anime & Comics · Silverfang
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce6mth
    Commented

    Imagine ssj4 + ssj god = a shape like ssj4 but orange and then you can evolve it to blue The ssj 4 limit breaker is just a small integration of divine ki that is not comparable to the ssj god of the ritual

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    I was Reincarnated as Krillin? Oh boy.
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce6mth
    Commented

    tenshinhan has more potential than ordinary humans

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    I was Reincarnated as Krillin? Oh boy.
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce7mth
    Commented

    Will he take the evolution route of the cold demon or those like golden freezer and black, or maybe both?

    Ch 3 Mutation
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    Frieza has a little brother!......and that is me!? - Dragon Ball
    Anime & Comics · Laughing_Tobi
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce7mth
    Replied to Laughing_Tobi

    show what you think

    Ch 3 Mutation
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    Frieza has a little brother!......and that is me!? - Dragon Ball
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce7mth
    Commented

    You already know what Frieza is like... he will have a miserable fate after the Namek saga until the Black Frieza thing happens, but knowing what the author is like, maybe Black Frieza will also end up miserable. But still Freezer doesn't give up

    Frieza stopped hitting me and turned towards the two aliens. I recognized them from the anime, they were-
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    Frieza has a little brother!......and that is me!? - Dragon Ball
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce7mth
    Commented

    Cooler: I came to save the day.

    "Frieza-sama, the main headquarters was attacked by cooler's men!"
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    Frieza has a little brother!......and that is me!? - Dragon Ball
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce7mth
    Commented

    Well, if you get to Namek when Frieza was cut in two, Frieza will see you as if you were a barking dog and your straw will save lives. XD Well, if you arrive on Namek when Frieza was cut in two, Frieza seeing you as a straw will save lives. Of course he will have a face like a licking dog XDD

    I didn't have time because I had to prepare the ship for entertaining my brother, Frieza, who was visiting me.
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    Frieza has a little brother!......and that is me!? - Dragon Ball
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  • Max_Arce
    Max_Arce7mth
    Commented

    obvious...

    I deadpanned. Here I am, suggesting something, and he is not taking a clue. Oh. He didn't get Sex Ed yet, right?
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    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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