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The story is fine, it's an entertaining story. What i like most about it is the world background. It feels unique and new. Although i hope there is more to the story like more complexity and more detail about the power system. What i don't like about it is the character progression on power levels is slow. And There are too many plot holes in the middle of the story. And the writings are a bit cringe.I think this novel can be more popular if you can fix this.That's all i hope you have a good day.