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  • DaoistbFsplI
    DaoistbFsplI1yr
    Replied to _Dream_God_

    I mean its the author's story every part of the story is an excuse i drop this novel a long time ago..

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  • DaoistbFsplI
    DaoistbFsplI1yr
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    It is written entertainingly, it's full of memes and references, the MC has the same power growth as Rimuru Tempest from Tensei Shitara Datta Ken, and Is OP with a growing sentient system it is a good story overall with the healthy heated r18 harem romance, adventure, and world-building, great addition to a mother Goat, with the MC drinking her milkies every day for exp.(until volume 3) Now let me get on the positive side of this novel. - Healthy Sweet Romantic Interests, romance is sweet and lovely it's full o sugar the way MC interacts with his loved ones is refreshing, funny, and a sweet talker. - the Main Character I have no qualms with his narcissistic arrogant greedy schemer womanizer personality, it is a funny side to him he is not dense the advances pretty well with his harem. That's all for the positives now let's move on to the Negative parts of this web novel kindly read it in consideration there are spoilers so fair warning. - The Big Problem of this novel is how the author inserts the details of his new powers, it was never properly explained in the past chapters and suddenly the system introduces him he can now do this, and there are some parts that those powers will be forgotten later chapters when William is fighting cause it's way too many to address so we are left with his Main super skills and Special Job classes, while the other classes have been given to her wives to grind experience. -The Title Stands for "I Got Reincarnated with a Strongest System" we see how he was reincarnated with the system by some Jack of all trades God, not some gamer god the system came from some CPU chip given by Gavin, he also accepted other powers from other gods like the harem, loli, and the Shepherd, the pace was nice and all the author introduced us with the systems the functions of his skills and his army of goats BUT that's when I read far off later volumes of this novel that I feel like that Title should change into "I Got Reincarnated as the Strongest Shepherd or Prince of Darkness or Strongest Harem" cause author never bother with system stats anymore until volume 3 we don't see much about his gaming system except he uses the skill appraisal that's when we readers were reminded that he has still a system cause it was almost forgotten cause of those past lives trope. -The Power structure is messy it has bugged me a lot, everyone is put under their power system from Magic Ranks, Adventure Ranks, Beast Ranks, and God Ranks? honestly, it's hard to compare how strong the monsters are and the people, cause there are no main power ranks. Example said beast is Myriad rank fighting a Seventh Circle magician so who is stronger? Is Seventh Circle Magician stronger can he stand against a Gold Rank Adventurer, does he compare to some demigod I don't know? It was rushed, details were thrown out the window we can't even compare William with those ranks cause he has his very own power structure, meaning it's impossible to know how strong he is on paper, -worldbuilding is let's see we have a world of Hestia a mixture of Eastern and Western Fantasy with Cultivation Sects and Fantasy Kingdoms and Empires, like Elves, Beastkins, Demons, we even have Respawning Monster Dungeons, Trial Towers, a Huge Academy with their own Nation, God Forbidden Domains, Huge Continents, from universal we have Space Giants, Modern Past and Future Lives, Void Realm, Greek, Norse, Egypt Gods and Modern Gods like FBI God, Truck kun God, Harem God, maybe it's quite messy to me though it's all the cliche genre been smashed together. -Author even sometimes makes readers go search google for references without bothering to place the details honestly just a simple explanation for a few words is enough for us readers. (Offline readers can't bother to go google) -Past Lives after volume 5 we suddenly get Past Lives Time Paradox plot, I was disappointed on how the author introduced this part cause it randomly starts with a dream and there he knew like the narcissistic elf he was, he was awesome on his past-past life too a strong soldier from Yggdrasil, honestly it was kinda forced from meeting his future daughters to look behold his grandpa was a former God from his past past life and the people of Lont were also former God soldiers of his grandpa reincarnated on the same world with William, it was too much honestly where is the foundation? What is the basis? We dont suddenly dream on past lives, how did he dream it there was no details except he sleep with his wife and suddenly dreams about it, - The Slave collar wow many readers were quite disappointed when this chapter was released a lot of them drop on this part when they see how MC was meek on his master when he was forced slavery and torture for training too me though I see no problem with it, his family has no problem with it cause his grandpa was petty instead on using his stolen wealth to buy William out of slavery he decides to accept it as training for a 10 year old, yeah he even send him out of his home to learn with an assassin about the cruelty of humanity. Even if he knew that he will be emotionally broken when he returns home he still do it for him, as part of training since William chose it. As a reader of dozens of novels this one feels mediocre, but I still read it for passing time and the memes.. Anyways it's a nice novel its still needs it's adjustments and that's all

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  • DaoistbFsplI
    DaoistbFsplI1yr
    Replied to Hedra_Dragon

    He is grateful to her considering that he also learned his master's past that she suffered worse than Williams,also MC learned the benefits of a slave collar at later chapters knowing half-elves are a hot commodity in slave market having a collar can deter slave traders besides the collar has a life saving function and a special skill specifically for the Dark Mages, so He is grateful for her but he did not forgave her until He Conquered her maidenhood to be apart of harem😏

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  • DaoistbFsplI
    DaoistbFsplI1yr
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    It is written in an entertaining enough way and is full of memes and references, the MC has the same power and Growth like Rimuru Tempest from Tensei Shitara Datta Ken, and is too OP with a growing sentient system it is a good story overall with the romance, adventure and worldbuilding, and a mother Goat to protect him from tbose power, fantasy, cultivation stories i read i was genuinely surprised that he has a mother goat drinking her milkies everyday for exp, i guess that made this novel special, most of the time are just cliche power building system fantasy of MC becoming god and flatting his enemies with his arrogant narcissistic personality, i even forgot that he has a system after reading 200 chapters onward cause author never bother to let us see his stats and tends too rush things, yep after the slow story chapters 100 below story starts to be get rushed and author puts random details from characters and a new power from his system that we never even heard from previous chapters, author even started putting and inserting random details which made me almost drop cause of messy plotline, this is the problem of these types of novels that tends to rush, authors randomly adds stuff without anything to backup his detail and be forgotten at later chapters. . Even The power structure has bugged me a lot, everyone is put under their own power system except William, he has his own power structure, meaning it's impossible to know how strong he is on paper the worldbuilding is a mixture of Eastern and Western Fantasy of Cultivation Sects and Fantasy Kingdom Genre, so the power structure is messy cause some we dont know if those characters go by the power building of Eastern or Western style troupe cause author never mentions how they grow stronger, The MC and the harem i dont have any problems with him from his Narcissistic Arrogant Shameless Personality With a Stockholm syndrome just a normal MC in these types of novels the only problem i have with him is his system we dont know how to gauge the system powers cause author just skims these details and put it "Strongest System" that randomly adds more powers. .the Slave,Nobility Heirachy,Polygamy i dont have qualms to it either i read loads of stories with these types of tropes so i already expected these.. Problem is Gavin MC's Patron god, A God with a power of Jack of all trades with no relation to the system whatsoever we can only connect his system powers to the CPU given to him, we dont know if this CPU is from Gamer God which would make sense for a Chosen God considering the title. I guess the author doesn't tell us the details concerning to his system just yet. . also his mother goat Ella goes to Mehh to literally talking as author decided to add the detail to "she can properly talk to MC now and we can hear the translated Mehh, Author even sometimes makes readers to go search google for references without bothering to place the details" honestly most of the Random details and rushed storyline is just lazy writing from the author at this point, Anyhow the side characters are normal developing side characters no annoying characters here except MC i bothered to read till the latest chapters it gets duller especially volume 3 tends to get even more rushed.. As a novel connoisseur its a good novel for new readers who likes rushed stories with OP Protagonist,Action,Healthy Harem Romance,Beast Companions and such. To me though it felt mediocre..

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