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It is written entertainingly, it's full of memes and references, the MC has the same power growth as Rimuru Tempest from Tensei Shitara Datta Ken, and Is OP with a growing sentient system it is a good story overall with the healthy heated r18 harem romance, adventure, and world-building, great addition to a mother Goat, with the MC drinking her milkies every day for exp.(until volume 3) Now let me get on the positive side of this novel. - Healthy Sweet Romantic Interests, romance is sweet and lovely it's full o sugar the way MC interacts with his loved ones is refreshing, funny, and a sweet talker. - the Main Character I have no qualms with his narcissistic arrogant greedy schemer womanizer personality, it is a funny side to him he is not dense the advances pretty well with his harem. That's all for the positives now let's move on to the Negative parts of this web novel kindly read it in consideration there are spoilers so fair warning. - The Big Problem of this novel is how the author inserts the details of his new powers, it was never properly explained in the past chapters and suddenly the system introduces him he can now do this, and there are some parts that those powers will be forgotten later chapters when William is fighting cause it's way too many to address so we are left with his Main super skills and Special Job classes, while the other classes have been given to her wives to grind experience. -The Title Stands for "I Got Reincarnated with a Strongest System" we see how he was reincarnated with the system by some Jack of all trades God, not some gamer god the system came from some CPU chip given by Gavin, he also accepted other powers from other gods like the harem, loli, and the Shepherd, the pace was nice and all the author introduced us with the systems the functions of his skills and his army of goats BUT that's when I read far off later volumes of this novel that I feel like that Title should change into "I Got Reincarnated as the Strongest Shepherd or Prince of Darkness or Strongest Harem" cause author never bother with system stats anymore until volume 3 we don't see much about his gaming system except he uses the skill appraisal that's when we readers were reminded that he has still a system cause it was almost forgotten cause of those past lives trope. -The Power structure is messy it has bugged me a lot, everyone is put under their power system from Magic Ranks, Adventure Ranks, Beast Ranks, and God Ranks? honestly, it's hard to compare how strong the monsters are and the people, cause there are no main power ranks. Example said beast is Myriad rank fighting a Seventh Circle magician so who is stronger? Is Seventh Circle Magician stronger can he stand against a Gold Rank Adventurer, does he compare to some demigod I don't know? It was rushed, details were thrown out the window we can't even compare William with those ranks cause he has his very own power structure, meaning it's impossible to know how strong he is on paper, -worldbuilding is let's see we have a world of Hestia a mixture of Eastern and Western Fantasy with Cultivation Sects and Fantasy Kingdoms and Empires, like Elves, Beastkins, Demons, we even have Respawning Monster Dungeons, Trial Towers, a Huge Academy with their own Nation, God Forbidden Domains, Huge Continents, from universal we have Space Giants, Modern Past and Future Lives, Void Realm, Greek, Norse, Egypt Gods and Modern Gods like FBI God, Truck kun God, Harem God, maybe it's quite messy to me though it's all the cliche genre been smashed together. -Author even sometimes makes readers go search google for references without bothering to place the details honestly just a simple explanation for a few words is enough for us readers. (Offline readers can't bother to go google) -Past Lives after volume 5 we suddenly get Past Lives Time Paradox plot, I was disappointed on how the author introduced this part cause it randomly starts with a dream and there he knew like the narcissistic elf he was, he was awesome on his past-past life too a strong soldier from Yggdrasil, honestly it was kinda forced from meeting his future daughters to look behold his grandpa was a former God from his past past life and the people of Lont were also former God soldiers of his grandpa reincarnated on the same world with William, it was too much honestly where is the foundation? What is the basis? We dont suddenly dream on past lives, how did he dream it there was no details except he sleep with his wife and suddenly dreams about it, - The Slave collar wow many readers were quite disappointed when this chapter was released a lot of them drop on this part when they see how MC was meek on his master when he was forced slavery and torture for training too me though I see no problem with it, his family has no problem with it cause his grandpa was petty instead on using his stolen wealth to buy William out of slavery he decides to accept it as training for a 10 year old, yeah he even send him out of his home to learn with an assassin about the cruelty of humanity. Even if he knew that he will be emotionally broken when he returns home he still do it for him, as part of training since William chose it. As a reader of dozens of novels this one feels mediocre, but I still read it for passing time and the memes.. Anyways it's a nice novel its still needs it's adjustments and that's all

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

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