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DeathOfDeath3dCommentedI really hope MC would lose 1 or 2 family members and no one can save them now.
"You haven't gained my trust or proven your worth enough for me to save them," Edward responded casually.- DeathOfDeath7dReplied to MrLarsBar
Oh, I guessed before seeing it đ. It smells Marvel science.
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Comic logic or something. It's all bs, like SSS can't be replicated for a century even with Captain being there. Whatever fits to the story, Marvel had done it. So why not coma in a fic. It might be even canon, I'm totally unsure đ.
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What got into the bro. This talk is suspicious as f.
"Say," Felix began, "do you think Spidey will get caught by the government soon?" - DeathOfDeath10dReplied to Jovan_Kat
The art of those eras, like Renaissance, showcased traditional clothing and hair. In a modern woman, they would also seem bad. Check their modern reconstruction. Also, don't forget the women that were the causes of wars because of their beauty.
Age-18[immortal] (1538 years old) - DeathOfDeath10dPosted
It's good so far. I didn't see grammar errors, setting is different than eastern cultivation novels. Names of some of the people were interesting, yes I noticed đ. Power system is also interesting, with a mix of western and eastern. I have a quesion. Is there harem? Didn't see it on the tags, but just to be sure. I sometimes can't trust WN.
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I forgot how many tier 2 he had but... It should be important because there will be a lot of children who will not acquire tier 1-2 until True God. He would have to make sure the wives have children first, using tier 1-2 , then with concubines and lovers. There are also future wives that he might get.
Then again, the reason why it kept the information was because it was not really important. He did not need these drops of Blood to access his own Powers. - DeathOfDeath12dCommented
Is Divine a term for any existence beyond Immortal, and not necessarily Gods? Like Archangels etc. would also be Divine here(whether they exist or not)? Or there's another term or ranking for those beings? Though even Dragons got Divine title, so likely they too are same, but not sure.
"Let's start." He commanded in his mind right before closing his eyes, deciding to fulfil her wish and turn her into the very being that had shaken her mind. - DeathOfDeath16dReplied to n0_cl0ut
I'm talking about after the End.
"Ah, I see. Well enjoy yourself. Do what you desire. However peace of advice, this multiverse is much more that what it seems. There are heroes, villains, magicians, demons, dimensional lords, all that jazz, so watch out for yourself. You are quite strong so you'll survive. Anyways, it was good knowing you, make sure you survive." Saying that, Lucifer leaves while's waving his hand at Klein. - DeathOfDeath16dReplied to n0_cl0ut
This is not the comic panel.đ¤Śđťââď¸
"You are correct. You are no longer in your universe. You somehow entered through the source wall, and arrived in my domain. Which normally could never happen. However it seems a much higher power is involved." Yahweh replies, while's looking up. All of a sudden the domain shakes as if it was about to crumble, before it returns to its serene state. (A/N: Dude nearly broke through the fourth wall *Whew*) - DeathOfDeath16dCommented
Imo, Klein wouldn't enter a relationship with WW easily. He might have been old, but his traditions regarding women should be same. Shouldn't be much different than other Chinese MC.
Hey guys, how did you enjoy this chapter? I've been trying to integrate DC characters into the story, without it seeming forced. I think I did a pretty good job. - DeathOfDeath16dCommented
Pure and upright... right.
"Since you are my first customer, they will be free. However seeing as you are an upright person, to repay me you can come again and buy some more." Klein replies, with a smile. It's been a long time since he's met someone quite pure and upright. - DeathOfDeath16dCommented
I hope MC can survive the end of the DC universe, even though it's too far till then. Maybe only the Presence could let him survive. He created Lucifer etc. that Death have no influence on, after all. Some fanfics forgets it and they end it with the assumption their MC can live for eternity, which is false.
"Ah, I see. Well enjoy yourself. Do what you desire. However peace of advice, this multiverse is much more that what it seems. There are heroes, villains, magicians, demons, dimensional lords, all that jazz, so watch out for yourself. You are quite strong so you'll survive. Anyways, it was good knowing you, make sure you survive." Saying that, Lucifer leaves while's waving his hand at Klein. - DeathOfDeath16dReplied to n0_cl0utUsing his spirit vision he looks for the 'rebellious' son of Yahweh. Finding him, he 'steals' the space between them appearing in front of him. Looking at him, Klein can only describe him as perfect (not in a sexual way). A handsome man with an angular jaw, sharp eyebrows, short blonde hair. Despite his handsomeness, Klein could feel immense power, close to Yahweh but not quite. His danger intuition tells him there isn't even a possibility to win against him, however he is not malevolent. He is, according to Yahweh, Lucifer Morningstar.
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*Mind the Overvoid.
"You are correct. You are no longer in your universe. You somehow entered through the source wall, and arrived in my domain. Which normally could never happen. However it seems a much higher power is involved." Yahweh replies, while's looking up. All of a sudden the domain shakes as if it was about to crumble, before it returns to its serene state. (A/N: Dude nearly broke through the fourth wall *Whew*) - DeathOfDeath16dCommented
Can't do it with Mind over the Void in charge of it.
"You are correct. You are no longer in your universe. You somehow entered through the source wall, and arrived in my domain. Which normally could never happen. However it seems a much higher power is involved." Yahweh replies, while's looking up. All of a sudden the domain shakes as if it was about to crumble, before it returns to its serene state. (A/N: Dude nearly broke through the fourth wall *Whew*) - DeathOfDeath18dCommented
I like more natural reincarnations tbh. There is Mind over the Void. A writer could do anything they want because Mind Over the Void is what writers write on. It would become reality the moment something is written. Making Presence a middle man is also doable because he is just a character inside Over the Void and a writer has control over him, but I think there's no need.
The Presence gave a curt nod to my words. "Now then to answer your first question from earlier, you are special due to the fact your soul managed to come to the place where we currently find ourselves after your untimely demise." The Presence explained. "Simply put, you are special because you appeared here before me on your without my assistance. A feat only a few number of other souls have managed. Hence why I am going to give you a second chance at life. Just like I gave them. Plus it will be entertaining to watch your adventures." - DeathOfDeath21dReplied to SectMasterWang
I thought he didn't paid system points. It was said later he paid.
The System easily neutralised every restriction placed on him, and within seconds, he was free to roam around as he liked. - DeathOfDeath21dCommented
That's it?
The System easily neutralised every restriction placed on him, and within seconds, he was free to roam around as he liked.