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Jayjayempi24dReplied to bearburrableThat's exactly what I wanted you to imagine!
When Junior said that they seemed to be angry he wasn't exaggerating, the Dragonites had very expressive faces and clearly seemed to be furious, I don't know what happened to put them like that, but I'm very sure that I will never make a Type Dragon angry, even from a distance you could see the amount of power they had and it was not too much to say that if Brock was not there the city would be destroyed without a place to happen. doubt.- Jayjayempi24dReplied to bearburrable
The answers will be much later but I really liked your comment! Maybe I'll cover that idea for another character.
After staring at me for a few minutes without saying anything, Mother Clarisse let out a sigh and told me: - Okay, you win, I will stop trying to make you not leave and I will support you in whatever way I can so that you can achieve your goal, who You know, maybe you'll realize how horrible Pokemon can be and decide to come back sooner, I just hope that you take good care of yourself and call me constantly to make sure you're okay. - He said adding the last thing with a refreshing smile, almost as if he longed for me. call even if I have not left yet. - Jayjayempi24dReplied to DarkujujCh 15 Chapter 15: Hunting
- Jayjayempi25dReplied to ywhy4_
It is explained later, you can see it with your Trainer license or with a Pokédex
Which makes me think that Clarisse was not exaggerating when she said that society literally revolved around Pokémon, basically the league sweetened the idea of being a trainer a lot, they offered quite a few benefits to anyone who wanted to start their journey, from when you get your license As a trainer you can go to any local gym leader and get your first Pokémon, the Pokémon varies a lot depending on the area the gym is located in, but you didn't have to worry about them only handling one type of Pokémon since the gym leader captured enough Pokémon from the area to have variety and be able to offer you something that suits your tastes, only of course everything is subject to availability and any Pokémon they give you would only be at level 5. - Jayjayempi1mthReplied to Jayjayempi
Besides, as I explain later, the level is not everything, it is like in games, with a team even at level 40 and with the correct resources and strategies you can win the league (which I am not saying will be the case in this story but it will be the case). There will be a lot of emphasis on the Trainer's abilities to manage his team) Thank you very much for your comment! I really liked that you showed interest in the story!
Ch 3 Chapter 3: Honey trap - Jayjayempi1mthReplied to ThreePlains
Don't worry about that, in particular what I'm looking for with this story is to maintain a certain margin of realism, in fact it's impossible for a team to reach champion level in one year but what I'm trying to show is that most of Trainer They stick to the idea of capturing everything and having more variety in their teams, therefore they do not dedicate all their attention to only 6 Pokémon, also the further you advance on the routes you will find stronger Pokémon in certain areas and the more strong Pokémon you defeat the more experience you will gain
Ch 3 Chapter 3: Honey trap - Jayjayempi1mthReplied to DarkujujCh 14 Chapter 14: Mission
- Jayjayempi1mthReplied to McTrippCh 9 Chapter 9: Tradition
- Jayjayempi1mthReplied to McTrippCh 8 Chapter 8: Miracle
- Jayjayempi1mthCommented
I imagine you rereading your work and taking notes for the next arc.
[A/N: Apologies for the delay, guys. I had to plan out a few things for the upcoming arc to make it interesting while ensuring that there are no inconsistencies in my plans. Took a bit longer than expected...] - Jayjayempi1mthReplied to DarkujujCh 13 Chapter 13: Fight
- Jayjayempi1mthReplied to Sangre60TenibrisCh 13 Chapter 13: Fight
- Jayjayempi1mthReplied to Morpheus_45368
thank you so much! The errors you pointed out in this chapter and in the third have already been corrected!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Jayjayempi1mthReplied to Morpheus_45368
I know, it was quite difficult to decide but I think you are satisfied with the choice.
That only left Aron and Nidoran as options , either of them were worth having on my team, their evolutions are powerful and have many advantages, in particular Aron was an option because his Type was good at fighting Pokemon Lance's Dragon in the future, but in the end the answer was pretty obvious.