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EthanRosenberg6dReplied to SHCH7Ch 8 Chapter 6: Rains of Castamere III- EthanRosenberg7dReplied to SHCH7Ch 8 Chapter 6: Rains of Castamere III
- EthanRosenberg7dCommented
The chapter was good. But I felt that MC would cut the villain in half with his cleave just like Sukuna. But it looks like we have to wait for it. Anyway the chapter was good, and I hope you have some sort of outline and know where things are heading.
Ch 8 Chapter 6: Rains of Castamere III - EthanRosenberg8dReplied to MyMumCallsMePigCh 6 Chapter 4: Rains of Castamere II
- EthanRosenberg9dReplied to Hyuga_Tobirama
And he can also have a army of children too right 😆😆. Just kidding. But I am really curious about the romance root, since he really love his wife.
The first light of dawn filtered through the wooden shutters of the Namikaze household, casting a soft glow on the tatami mat flooring. Birds chirped outside, their songs a gentle prelude to the day's festivities. Naruto, a boy of five with an old soul and a sharp mind, stood in his room, struggling to don the traditional robes that lay before him. The rich fabric felt foreign against his skin, the intricate design befitting the son of the Hokage and the future leader of the Uzumaki clan—a clan that, in reality, no longer existed. - EthanRosenberg9dCommentedCh 2 Author Notes and Spoiler
- EthanRosenberg15dCommented
well the chapter was great. But why did he kill him though, couldn't he have try to recruit him or something?
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one more thing, please try to break down the paragraphs some more. Honestly it's scary 😅
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This chapter was good. Although I would have like a original appearance of the mc. But overall it was on the right track. Keep going author.
This book has been deleted. - EthanRosenberg2mthReplied to SiNgLeSiNcEbIrTh33
Well in the original work Wikipedia it was given as both gold and metal. But I'll admit gold sounds much better.
"I'm of the metal attribute now, but it doesn't mean I'll always have only that attribute," Lu Yunxiao shrugged, smiling. - EthanRosenberg2mthReplied to SiNgLeSiNcEbIrTh33
Yes, you are right. I will fix it.
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- EthanRosenberg5mthReplied to Dieudonner_17
Yes, I have fixed all chapter 3 naming spelling mistakes. Thanks for informing me.
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