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sewerslvt1dCommentedPlease use ‘example’ for thoughts.. it’s wayyy less confusing to read that way
"That hurt....somewhere that hurt..." He thought.- sewerslvt3dCommented
While the writing isn’t bad It’s like a major plot hole because the mc is 12 doing crazy stuff and no one is questioning it at all. You can probably mitigate this by just going back through the earlier chapters and making him just a year younger than ichigo instead so that it makes more sense. Especially with how he acts, it’s not like a kid at all.
"Thanks for the compliment, Riku. You know just what to say," she replied with a playful grin. - sewerslvt3dCommentedCh 24 Chapter 24: Bossu~
- sewerslvt5dReplied to BridgeToHeavens
Real man ☹️
That's right. Its been 10 years since that day, 10 years since Issei had lost his parents. Ophis had become the closest thing he could have to be mother ever since he lost his. She was always there when Issei had called for her, she helped him awaken his sacred gears and was always there to listen to him whenever he wanted to talk. - sewerslvt5dCommented-Impregnation Bonus: [2x2500]= 5,000 MSP
- sewerslvt5dReplied to SoulsBorne_Lover
Deserves better 🫤
"Ah," her voice possessed the same distant quality as Melina's, yet lacked the hint of melancholy. Perhaps it wasn't the past that held her captive, but something else entirely. "A Tarnished..." Her voice trailed off, a keen gaze piercing through the mask's eye slits to fall upon him. "A mage as well." Her form seemed to solidify, a hint of wariness replacing her initial surprise. "Why have you sought me out?" - sewerslvt5dReplied to FeralLover1
Basically the guy who wrote the theory of unconscious actions
When making a jump you don't actively calculate the distance, right? Your unconscious does it for you. So why can't it do more than that? - sewerslvt5dCommentedCh 7 Time For An Upgrade
- sewerslvt8dCommented
Calling march a TikTok egirl gotta be a sin 😭😭
Eventually, I turned a corner to see two figures running past me. One was a tiktock egirl with her pink hair, weird outfit, and holding a bow, and the other was just some dude who looked like he was cosplaying a Genshin character with a spear. What was that guy's name again? Ciao? Mao? - sewerslvt8dReplied to ObamaUchiha
It wasn’t bad to read tho. Definitely painted the picture clear
He wore black traveling garb, once shimmering with enchantments that faintly glinted in the dying light. Silver accents, once may have been fashionable, were now dulled and tarnished, mirroring the state of his clothes. The garments themselves hung in shreds, whispering tales of a thousand battles endured. In between his hand, a violet staff pulsed with glint-stones of the highest caliber. - sewerslvt10dCommentedCh 43 The Journey
- sewerslvt21dCommentedSLAP
- sewerslvt21dCommentedCh 12 Finally got a PC
- sewerslvt21dCommentedCh 5 Rush
- sewerslvt22dCommented
OMG he’s actually going to turn into an acceptable character !!?
[Sister Seeker: Yeah, Don't be like me. From what I saw in the source material, I am somewhat of a yes-man kind of guy. Especially if it is the girls I am close to asking me. I also need to toughen up a bit, I guess.] - sewerslvt22dReplied to Dissapointed_One
Bro might be the main character of this novel ☠️
[Elder Sister: I'm fine with it too. Honestly, I'm not even that invested in the story most of the time. It bothers me how much impact Erza has on everything like she is always there for some reason. I won't stand for it, hmph.] - sewerslvt23dCommentedCh 9 Senpai's Compulsory Lessons
- sewerslvt26dCommented
I see what ya did here
Especially with Kenichi's serious attitude, which made him even more satisfied. His small Izakaya could not be considered a legacy; it was just normal; if it were, he would want Kenichi as a disciple. - sewerslvt27dReplied to Orian2209"...ummu..." Groggily opening her eyes, Furina slowly started to wake up. With her eyes half-open, she yawned. "Hawn~"
- sewerslvt28dCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: New Powers And Mischief