What a great way to start the story! It really leaves you hooked and wanting to keep reading. In the first minute of starting to read it, I knew what I had to do... that was to add it to the library! You're really going to enjoy it... and you're going to want more!

I think she's a bit traumatized.

his name is....what?

Is there vandalism with consent?

What will they come to discuss?

Yes, at that time it must have been beautiful.

oh, the itch. Such a bittersweet feeling, poor girl.

What a great way to start the story! It really leaves you hooked and wanting to keep reading. In the first minute of starting to read it, I knew what I had to do... that was to add it to the library! Don't be scared that the prologue is in 3 parts, you're really going to enjoy it... and you're going to want more![ img = recommend ]

An incredible beginning of novel! It really hooks you from the first minute of reading it! the narration and the descriptions make you feel that you are there, in the novel. Without a doubt, it became one of my favorite novels. Add it to your library, you won't be disappointed!

The story develops correctly, something strange starts, but it is immediately fixed. The writing style needs to be refined and leaves you wanting some action, it's just getting started so it's not really a bad thing. the world is well built and overall, it's a story worth following.

The start is interesting, there is fluidity and constant updates. I'm waiting for more chapters! [img=recommend] I hope to see more about this interesting story and what awaits the MC

What a poetic way of narrating just one scene, I liked it. The first chapter does not explain anything but leaves the reader in suspense and floods with great interest to know how it continues. Overall, it's a pretty good opening chapter if you want it to be a long story.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I will work hard so that you can enjoy the story even more.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I will work hard so that you can enjoy the story even more.

Thanks for your comments, I also think I left the consequences quite simply. Don't worry, I will work hard to improve the punishments. This male leader will not be the typical male leader with a system that never receives a punishments.

they travel together, they are members of the same team. (Mikaella, the hero and a few other members)

Gracias! Yo aprecio realmente tú apoyo. Todavía no se si voy por el camino correcto, y traducir esto es realmente complicado jaja.