short but packs a punch

I think this novel packs a punch and second of all I must add that the first chapter along with the description feels kind of awkward. But I am hopeful that you will improve it

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Shameless Review: Writing Story is my passion, words my blood. Ok that was cringe but thankfully it had expanded my words for this review. So yeah, enjoy the story

Shameless Review: I think it has a unique story albeit the plot of being extra may be kind of cliche. This story will also deal with mental issues as the mc himself has been sexually abused along with being tortured. Also, the MC will fear and hate females due to past but will not hesitate to attack or argue if pushed to the brink so no cowering MC. Overall going to be a great book Author-San please update.

Shameless review. Pretty good plotline if I do say myself though the writing may feel a bit weird at first, but I will say from the later parts it will improve. Slight Glimpse Of The MC: Evil To Bone Will have harem but he treats them as objects. Only Cares for Power I think you all will probably root for the other characters instead of the MC but who knows?

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Shameless Review: New fanfiction with a new idea of a system which only focuses to make you the strongest mage removing every other element and what if this element was important in the world, you currently reside. Well, if you are intrigued by this idea check it out. First, I thought I would make him a gamer in the first draft but then I made him a mage. Vote if you want the first draft as gamer or the current draft as mage

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now that I think about it, the wood must have a core which was probably left by a death eater when they teleported away

also it's kind of big but not Pokemon collecting like

black sisters and Daphne are there but i will add the others

sure and do you want anyone else?

until his brother is sent away after that free unless death tells him something

no no he will change but for the first part of his life he has to fulfill this since some things are written in destiny

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Shameless Review: This is an AU of harry potter. I will try to avoid cliches and stereotypes but still help me improve. Also, this novel I made with a vision which I hope to stand upon.

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