Incredibly similar premise to Scholar's Advanced Technological System. The latter goes more in-depth regarding the specifics of the technology and build-up to produce them. Other than that there are some incredibly cringe moments where mc acts like he's a 5yr old shouting. I can't even definitively call that a face-slapping tag, it's 100% cringe.

immense potential but I'm not sure if the author cares about this story or is simply forced/uninspired about their work. After the first dozen chapters, this novel is comparable to MTL novels in that the dialogue makes no sense, mostly out of order, or there is no clear distinction between reflective and vocal dialogue. Finally, my main gripe is the inconsistent spelling of names and frequent swapping of a character's pronouns.

for real though, author should just ctrl+f every instance of 'nutty' for amazing or awesome. Nutty is so damn weird

well, don't bother reading this novel unless you plan to read only up to ch364, because the names of everything/everyone suddenly changes. And from some other reviews that I've belatedly found, the abrupt name change fiasco happens for multiple characters in future chapters again.. ps. I was really enjoying the translation for this novel, truthfully this novel is better than its counterpart black tech internet cafe too

heads up, end of chapter needs a fix ' Lirael paused, then she glanced at nux and, ' replace nux with vaan

any1 else feel like at some point Natalyas character started becoming annoying?

there are conflicting mentions of Yazdegerd and Theodosius' mother being in control via proxy. I'm perplexed on this point.. isn't Yazdegerd the Sassanid king? how is the eastern border with his empire a threat if he moved west to confront Marcellus

is there supposed to be some kind of dialogue or something here? it's just showing as ~ .... ??? xXx for the next few lines

well also around the time he starts developing his alter ego(?) I guess, the inner dialogues he's having are shown as just a bunch of '......' or 'Xxxxx' I'm almost certain that's not intended..

Can’t view the next two chapters?

this isn't the worst english i've seen, but there are some rather obvious grammar mistakes that could easily be fixed with a spellcheck or sentence structure app.

A very typical harem novel. The story makes sense but the MC's character changes too fast without explanation. My biggest complaint would be that author first person to write most sentences. Though it's free novel so can't complain too much

Good enough romance, but it's not a 5/5 considering ML somehow falls in love with FL within seconds even though he's portrayed as cold-hearted due to his past. My second point of contention would be that I assume the author has little to no knowledge of showbiz (though even without you could somehow still make a better plot), otherwise, I fail to understand why every plot regarding FL at work is revolving around sabotage instead of actual adversity. Nonetheless, I did enjoy this novel though I would recommend taking the synopsis with a grain of salt, it's misleading and if you didn't know better, assume it's not even the same novel.

Sigh. The summary sounds interesting and I like stories in this genre, unfortunately, as a native English speaker, there is just too much broken English and grammar (as of chapter 3) that I don't think I can give this novel a fair chance. I recommend getting an editor author-san.

Initially, the story was great, it had me hooked until around 300 chapters in. But then I think the author ran out of ideas to challenge the MC and FL's relationship. Like, come onnnnnnn, how the hell can Talia walk in on some ex trying to seduce Damon 50 times over and over and over again. This repetitive troupe alone is so off-putting that I unfortunately can't continue reading past 600 chapters

more like two, dual cultivation has been on serious back burner for awhile unfortunately. :(

regarding the sentence 'after all, she was the only blood family he had in his two lives!', I believe it was said Aurora was adopted?

hey author, I'm noticing a repeat grammar issue where 'sign' is used instead of 'sigh'

well it seems alright so far, somewhat overdone. grammar wise towards the end it should be "Theo sighed as he thought." instead of "Theo signed as he thought."

hopefully, chapter gets fixed..