Review Detail of Chibi_9139 in Reborn as a Dragon with Devouring System

immense potential but I'm not sure if the author cares about this story or is simply forced/uninspired about their work. After the first dozen chapters, this novel is comparable to MTL novels in that the dialogue makes no sense, mostly out of order, or there is no clear distinction between reflective and vocal dialogue. Finally, my main gripe is the inconsistent spelling of names and frequent swapping of a character's pronouns.