nothing new, always being outsmarted by the enemy, this story is getting boring

dude, if it's you, would you recognize who was the traitor among them, I mean he doesn't have a real knowledge about them, he was just being told by the old man what were the traitors look like and what are their abilities, he came from the future dude not a regressor, don't expect the mc he knows all things especially when the mc himself just got transferred back in time like 2-3 hours at most

that big snake was useless huh?, author forgetting that he has a strong subordinate just to force that plot armor of mc, could have done better, just like mc altogether with all of his summons including that snake fighting someone very strong then, die cause of power gap

100+ chapters and mc was still somewhat careless, naive and soft, still trying to look for that character development🥴.................................................

yeppss, mc told himself not to be careless but still doing it like wtf, where's the character dev there, always leaving a clue that could be traced back to him

Whenever mc goes on his adventures, someone always watch his back/monitor him, and then he goes like 'I have bad premonition' but then he still act like idiot and then run for his life🥴

Author-san, why do you keep introducing strong characters when the mc still weak as fck, im at chap 190 and he's still at the level of orange soul, sure he can fight level above his but the enemies that kept appearing was way too strong for him, don't get me wrong, the story was good and I like it but my only concern was the mc was always at the mercy of others, such as when he was attacked and forced to join the nightingale

I wouldn't really be surprised if the story goes for atleast 3000+ chapters something like that, I mean up until now mc was still a first order you know and the story was already so close to 900

A 100+ chapters and mc was still in 1st cultivation realm, most of the chapters was wasted because of unnecessary and repetitive information like how does body will achieve something like that, how can I control my internal breathing more freely yada yada, author focusing on word count literally destroyed this story haiist

This story was definitely a cheap copy of the novel I've once read before, I think the title was The Castle of All People: The Only Random Army Angel at the Beginning of the Game, same plot but delivered differently

The family arc ruined it all, author-san just messed up this amazing novel, the story got all over the place, mc was getting stupid for each passing moments, haiisttt

Laugh so hard with the one piece reference, like seriously haki and devil fruits hahahahahaha you got me really there author san🤣🤣🤣🤣........

The author describes every detail to the point of obnoxiousness. I mean that's not bad considering that it was necessary for a story but for the unimportant part, the author could just skip describing it..