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SeraNya1yrCommented"female child". Why is everyone writing stuff like 'the female this', 'the male that' these days?. Whatever happened to boys and girls, men and women?
Standing up, Ava, Benedict, and the unknown female Burke child continued to make their way to the platform, with Edmund right behind, his mind lingering on the incident he had just witnessed.- SeraNya1yrCommented
Yeah, I mean, magic, the force, two souls merging from different dimensions is fine and all... but a girl who sees things others can not sounds a bit sketchy indeed.
But considering that she seemed more mysterious than anyone could imagine, he decided to half-believe her. - SeraNya1yrCommented
Scribblehub would be my preference. Easy to keep up what's new and has a good search with proper tags.
- Should i relocate in another website like Fanfiction*dot* net? - SeraNya1yrCommented
Oh no.. please, not another one.
It would be better to have two or three girlfriends. Now that destiny has allowed himself to be reborn in the Malfoy family, one more thing may be added-he also wants to try to change the family's destiny, protect the family's glory, and even bring the family to the next level. - SeraNya1yrCommented
If this becomes yet another harem novel among the many, I doubt I would still be interested in reading further. Instead of adding multiple love interests as forgettable accessories for no good reason, I'd be much more interested in a focus on a single lover with good character development and a deep bond to the MC.
Ch 19 Notice - SeraNya1yrCommented
Ugh... this whole novel is going to be one long training montage isn't it? With 5% story and the rest is training and yappin' about magic and buffing up.
Tomorrow, I'll go to classes, learn a few new magics from the professors here at Hogwarts, and then, after classes are finished, go directly towards the RoR, to start practicing my magic without any worries! - SeraNya1yrCommented
Haha, with his 'harem' nonsense in the beginning. For over 100 chapters you've written him as emotionally dead and socially handicapped. No girl should suffer to deal with that. Just let him date his AI bots. Those are a perfect match.
'Huh, she is really a hardcore Ravenclaw. She seems to enjoy studying very much. Maybe she will become a teacher in the future.' Concluded Matthew as he replied, "That's nice I visited Paris for a week but mostly spent my time here in London. Unfortunately, I didn't have the time to visit the magical part of Paris yet. Maybe I will visit that next summer." - SeraNya2yrReplied to 7350Ledger
Using metric and imperial mixed in one sentence is a bit weird, was my point. :)
There flying several hundred feet off the ground was amassive bird that looked alot like a crow but it had some differences. For one it had two sets of wings meaning it had four in total and that's not even mentioning the fact that it's wing span was over four hundred feet wide. It also had three extremely long tails that were covered in feathers, each tail was around thirty five metres long. It's beak and talons were golden and they looked like they were made of metal with how sharp they were. But the most eye catching thing about it where it's eyes that glowed a dark red. - SeraNya2yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - SeraNya2yrCommentedCh 8 Greek and Japan
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"Several hundred feet" and "Thirty five metres long" Are you perhaps a schitsofrenic mathematician? ;)
There flying several hundred feet off the ground was amassive bird that looked alot like a crow but it had some differences. For one it had two sets of wings meaning it had four in total and that's not even mentioning the fact that it's wing span was over four hundred feet wide. It also had three extremely long tails that were covered in feathers, each tail was around thirty five metres long. It's beak and talons were golden and they looked like they were made of metal with how sharp they were. But the most eye catching thing about it where it's eyes that glowed a dark red. - SeraNya2yrCommentedCh 22 Vampire Fox Evolution System Ch21 (Slaves No Longer)
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RIP yuri novel? :(
And no matter what happened, I have to survive because I believe Yerre is also here somewhere. And once we got reunited, I'm going to wish for the genie to change me into a man. - SeraNya2yrCommentedCh 19 Vampire Fox Evolution System Ch18 ('Why?')