W character development

Author i have my boards in a month this is the only thing im reading make the next few chapters worth it

Best novel I read need more

Why did u end the story already my day is ruined

Brodie we need michael to get that lightning soul trait on god he gon cook so hard it aint even funny

Quick question If i remember correctly divine eyes was a 7 tier soul trait the fact that its combined with spirit gaze will that mean he will get like an insane soul trait

Whoever said make Alice the FML yes author i support

Calm before the storm W chap gonna stack now

Author should i stack chaps because i have a feeling theres gon be ton of cliffhanger action scenes from now onwards

Its good but a major flaw is the character being an edge lord throughout like I understand where he is coming from but he needs to act more decisively and not hide his power because doing that just creates more problems for him but otherwise its nice because it kind of reminds me of authors pov

W but more regular updates waiting for new chapter everyday

Author will this be everyday 3 chapters or just today was a lucky day for us readers

update

Damn same it reminded me of inzauma eleven was lowkey hyped to read this but people dying cuz of a football match is nonsensical especially if the main purpose is that

Ok Brutall honest review I like it however I think the video game genre is just repeated not much you can do with not making it cliche but author has done a decent job of atle not making him reincarnate second chance bullshit rise to the top but the sick sister annoys me fucking every mc has some little sister who is dying and he needs money to save her. Writing and updating good 10 chapters a week minimum could be more. I like the character design of most especially the mc just give more emphasis on side characters at times and other perspectives give them their development and the world building is top tier as well not fully introduced as of now but been foreshadowed that its vast

Ya the powers are brought to the real world another thing which i appreciate mc says when chaos happend when everyone relaised u can get powers in real world he dint go around protecting everyone he did his duty of protetcing his sister no righteous mc bs

There no romance up till now mc has only kissed a girl in the game though and 2 other girls like him not sure where the author will go with the story tho

This is interesting ima have to stack chapters though author keep it up

I like the premise and plot however the powerscaling is off putting with mc skills and stats he should be able to fight 10 levels above him however when he was level 25 fighting a level 81 is crazy

it can means future tense currently it is a good read not every novel has some cons in them this being a major one because the plot dosent make sense when the author tries this like guild wars for example which was hella stupid