i love this, but the introduction could have been more of a details about the characters but then again it's definitely gonna be something great.

it's definitely a start of something great. keep up the good work.

i really liked your work please try to publish the next chapter asap can't wait for another 3 days. and please add some more information about the mc and the world

Why is no one here it's such a good story I always wanted to read something like this.