Second chap what do you think?

Wow nice plot I had a similar idea for my fanfic

heaven just kill that person after all not everyone is like FY

I want fy to do a full on fight I think at this point unless something goes massively wrong he can wreck the venerable even in their bases

Is this dropped?

Nah for me rank ten might be to create a gu world in itself and you become the heaven of your own world making you immortal

Can you tell me how to make a novel in a few months or so I will try to make a novel about Ren zhu's journey.

Gs name is ok

Wdym the Author often includes side stories in between fights.

Lol kinda embarrassing that 5he name I just randomly type was feature but anyways thanks for the chap

I forgot to add somethings obviously for the profoundities of heaven and earth someone with high heaven path attainment will comprehend it faster and as for spectral soul's killer move it could be Saint soul it uses heaven path and soul path to see and comprehend all things in a certain area. As for Fy he is already op so no killer moves.

Hello I love your work but I have a few more suggestions you could do. 1. RL killer move was way to weak like all it did was bring GD's move forward. (Maybe it could bring multiple rank 9 killer moves from GD though it would be unstable as the river of time was already unstable and her fate is not confirmed yet) 2. I have a few killer moves that you could use for Star constellation she could use a the killer move profundity of heaven it makes it target fall in a trance like state they contemplate about heaven while star path Dao marks eat/neutralize them. 2.2 for Paradise earth he could use 'territory' to summon any scene from his painting and controll them with his earth path attainment. 2.5 For Giant Sun he could use 'All lose ends tie together' which could turn previous bad events into way that benefit him aka turn his eternal slumbering into a way that actually helps him with his previous misfortunes. (Very proud of this one) 3 Fangyuans intelligence is to op while he only has a few hundred years of experience the other vernable have tens of thousands they shouldn't be provoked or embarrassed this easily and fangyuan also should be able to fool them so easily. 4. You should try to contact another great RI fanatic maker and collaborate he is called lone worker.

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Is this dropped?