You were being a good sport. If there are any other parts you don’t like please comment.

it is supposed to be taken as light heartedly. I don’t know if you have younger siblings, but it’s just jokes for the most part. Its a six year old teasing her older brother, then he goes a long with her wishes to get her to stop. Sure he could have forced her, but there is no fun in that. Writing an “Alpha” to me is kinda boring, and this helps establish that early on.

I would like to give shout-outs to Bloodcoler, HigherSage, WizardMarshallz, BonBon1, kevin_pulido, Glizzy567, and last but not least Druidpriest for donating power stones. by gifting power stones they are helping my story reach more people, and I think that's pretty stellar.

I recently went back and looked through my first 3 chapters, and I realized I made some mistakes. The most important being that Percy is currently within his first year, so Scabbers is at Hogwarts right now. I also edited minor spelling mistakes and tried to make my writing easier to understand. If you guys have any pointers please tell me.

I just fixed the mistake. If you see any other errors please tell me.

Merry Christmas everyone!!! Sorry for not posting it was the holidays, and I was busy I just wanted to give a shout-out to Glizzy567, and Druidpriest for being my first contributors ever. I'm a new creator, and it probably doesn't mean anything, but know I appreciate you.