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Yes, 15 metres is 45 feet
Shameless author review? Naw. From the viewpoint of a reader, not enough updates, characters don’t interact smooth enough just yet, grammar could be better in a few spots but not many, use too many commas, spelling mistakes are rare but occasionally spot a few, story is progressing slowly, but that can be attributed to the updates as well.
As for airbending*
But what constitutes water? Is it simply H2O? Or is it any liquids? With earthbending it’s the earth, so like minerals and stuff, impurities in the metals allow metal bending. Lava bending is just heating up the molecules and stuff. Fire bending is… basically useless in my opinion. As for sore bending if they are just bending air, then that means they can bend anything in the air. So hydrogen, oxygen, nitrogen, and any other trace amounts of gases. So technically airbenders should be called gas benders. Waterbenders can bend the water out of the air and airbenders should be able to separate the water into separate elements
Any opinions on if he should only have one type of bending or multiple? I know that canonically he shouldn’t have more then one type of bending, but meh. If he is to only have one type of bending then it would be water bending. He could practice bending and get so powerful with it that he could forcefully bend Planet 4546B through space, however that would be impossible due to many different reasons, starting with the fact that there would be no sun or moon(s) around the planet
You do realize that he is 16, right? This also goes into the comment you made about a hero complex. He is a teenager, of course he has a hero complex. Plus he doesn’t think it’s a big deal to save someone because he still doesn’t know how valuable life is. Also I will try to make the dialogue less robotic and I am idea on how to do so. Thanks for the input!
I mean, with earth bending could you theoretically bend the iron out of someones blood? Plus just metal bending and lava bending alone are good. He will definitely have water bending since if he is a strong enough bender, what would happen if he stayed on a planet that was almost exclusively water. like 97% water
Yeah but like, they want to know how much
I thought this was the MC talking, but no
One punch man!
Probably the gold
LoTM?
It put a smile on my face reading this. I imagined three dumbledores doing ninja moves around her and trying to defeat her.
While eating a snail
What is a lemon scene?
Make sure to wipe the screen
AHEM* I think you meant Multiverse?