it sounds so wrong

Mc is just a damn pusherover and a gkin slave

ai generated

this shit is boring asf. If ya wanna know more why i said this, read it so you can waste your damn time.

probably before he got the talent.

This is pure comedy lmfao😭 I really thought this would be a serious book but i shouldve thought otherwise with how the cover is😭😭😭

he probably is, i mean everyone uses it now.

correct me if i am wrong, this technique blinds the person its casted upon?

I'm kinda impressed with how the writing is. It almost feels like an a.i made it, It's a compliment really. Good Concept, mc isn't all knowing, and i wonder what kind of encounters he will have.

The characters feels like npc's and there's not much detail to the story.

Time's Awakening: The Rebirth of a Passion" is a captivating tale of self-discovery, redemption, and the power of one's indomitable spirit. As our protagonist navigates the world of basketball, he not only hones his skills but also learns profound lessons about himself and the true meaning of pursuing one's passion. Our mc Yūsuke "Yū" Takahashi is a stoic person and he replies in minimal words. I know where the stories will go but I would like to see an honest review and ideas to improve what needs to be improved of my amateur novel.

how to be bokuto and akashi in one sentence.

bruh i think ive watched this joke on tiktok or yt reels earlier this day.

if it were me id probably want god sleed impulse, post laat game emperor eye and probably an imppecable talent of a body

Bro wot

The dude is hella dense and a big fkin idiot.

One thing's for sure, you would regret not reading this fic. Many probably would not because of their dumb standard for reading but to those who did read it, are you enjoyin it? cause i hell for sure am. I mean i thought it was just gonna be one of those fics where soul gets reincarnated then gets a god as family then he becomes op as fuck and It sure wasnt. mc literally got trained by a god just enough to give him an edge for future adventure and his goal. Mc is strong no doubt but i depends on what kind of enemy or who he is facing. Story development is mwuah mwuah too like with how alaya and gaia is inserted and who or what could his future enemies be. Mc is kinda dense but at the same time not, he knows and he doesnt know. the story does gives how ladies fall for him unlike other fics where girls bam the instantly falls in love. i probably wont get disappointed in the romance and harem genre in the futute but im curious how he will develop his harem. The drama and angst for the fic is just just enough for me not to get bored of it but it's also gives mc his development in the past present and near future 5/5 overall updates fast too! I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!!! DONT DISAPPOINT US!!!

this was quite a disappointing and boring read. honestly, i hope this fic gets better with time. i expect more from you author-san!

fr? then pls do try harder, i have high hopes for this. people usually uses shanks or mihawk templates and i saw this fujitora template fic.

find a proof reader and editor. it might get better reviews and more viewers since thid fic have great potential.