Alright if this is the protag's aura then this dude needs to grow a brain and get the duck out to a new city but I have a feeling that this definitely isn't gonna happen as that would require more work for the author who already got me. Why, why did I decide to click the top up button, duck this app!

*cough cough*

Psst, don't tell the author that their novel might actually be my new favourite and I may be forced back into the ad mines. Don't tell them though or they'll be sad.

My binge has been stopped by the pay wall but take my golden tickets for the good time. Stay awesome, comment section vibes were great.

Wait i might be mixing up different arts with blood in their names.

Was scared we would have the usual cliché antique scene.

Wholesome

I might have to consult my doctor about diabetes after this chapter.

I really like the pace of these first couple chapters. nothing crazy going on, limited information to really get a feel of ordinariness because he really is just trying to get by right now.

Sad he didn't think to use the cultivation fluid upgrade reward on an S level to see if it will go beyond, he just thought of A to S. Not much ambition

This is exactly what I've been searching for. It's so well written but there's only 5 chaps aahhhh. It's just the beginning but so much was told I love it. Thank you, my night has been made

Solid👍

A beautiful portrayal with stark contrast in all the little details of the darkness. Hits deep reading this at 1am. Can imagine it better in the dark. Nice

ACTUAL good character building in a world way different from ours!!! Awesome job

I really liked how there was the essence of everything I liked, just needed a couple more details to paint the environment(like when they were on the lump of flesh dragon passing through several countries while doing the deed it would be nice to hear about all the climates they’re passing through) , maybe a ting more detail when the mysterious magician loses her husband and kid, it sparked my curiousity as to why she was so cold, but the way it was worded about the lack of feelings in her eyes left too much out. Really can’t complain about anything because it covered all my core likes about LNs. The scene at the beach made me add to the library in preparation for all the exploring they’l be doing in an unknown world(s). You’ve got a great start and I know your writing will only get better.

The most streamlined status, being used for word count?

This story has been refreshing and great so far that it fights back against the confusing pronoun switch-ups but it also makes me a little frustrated that there is much potential with this

Bruuuuh, eveRyone is crying and you had to add in a spoiler to appease them but it ruins the story, please put in a SPOILER WARNING before the message about him being a reincarnator. it would be so much better if it was introduced at an exciting part later in the story