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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to AlphaZwei

    Goku has more IQ than this guy...

    One quick bonk on the head as Saeko whimpers at the hit as Tatsumi lectured her as he spoke in a deadpan tone, "Cool it miss sadist. We get it that you can get in with your inner dark self like an anime protagonist."
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Jovami6729

    Still... doesn't make sense. Third I can get, but forth? Do you mean there was another war hence AU universe or are you trying to write as if explaining? Because the kumo didn't really fight Hyugas during the fourth war. Their kage got into his head to kidnap a hyuga after the third or second war I think for how powerful and devastating they were on the battlefield and he wanted that power in kumo. The problem on this sentense is that it says that kumo only notice how powerful their eyes are in the fourth way which creates a vacuum in history and disturbs the naruto plot.

    During the Fourth Shinobi World War, a Kumo-nin noted that they had a hard time against them during a previous war.
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Maelstrumao

    Can freeze time, can hold a fight with a master swordsmand with a one-hit K.O. sword and even win with a smile, is an expert on torture and has mind broken a lot of "strongwilled" dudes that where LEADERS of armies. Who supposedly will get the hots for you so hard she went full yandere on you... ... .. Yeah. Can't blame a guy for having no problem being the pet in this kind of relationship. You don't mess with the yandere girl with those records. No, you DON'T mess with a yandere, period. Just try to run away or kill her if possible but good luck against Esdeath.

    [The Dimensional Group Chat has been created, congratulations for the "EsdeathBitch" to become the group owner.]
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Ototsu_Yume

    Follow the plot is putting it mildly.... there is trying to keep the plot and then there is "let my friends be torture/raped/killed" so everything happens as it should... this guy so far has show me he has Goku levels of reasoning but still, i must continue. Really hoping things get better after a while, after all... we still haven't reached that point, so things may still go different! I HAVE hope!

    But still I wish I still had a cheat but then again, my future knowledge is my greatest strength to have as well as hard work.
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Betoran

    Update on this, it's actually a good slow paced romance(slow as in hours of lecture to even touch harem, and even then it touches it with a stick and glove).

    In fact, only the very happy smile on his wife's face was enough for Rob.
    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to trueidiocy_577

    Sadly, it is confirmed. We are on the last saga of one piece. It's in the works my man.

    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Posted

    Gonna be honest. Really like the story so far, it isn't the typical MC of many "harem" novels. It doesn't even get to the "harem" until much, much later on the story and even then it barely touchs it with a stick. Yes, the MC had "thoughs" that doesn't really align with his "i have a wife" persona he takes on some chapters. Even going as far as saying "I'm loyal to my wife" then three lines later says "I want to collect those beauties for myself". Yet that is all he does, say things like that but doesn't really "Act" on this impulse. Which put him above... more than half the half assed females throw to the mc foot novels. The MC's interactions with the world, the lore and characters are on point. On some very few cases you are left scratching your head on some OOC characters but that is to be expected, after all. There are a LOT of characters on one piece. The novel lives up to its tags. Don't come expecting a steady grow on power or underdog kind of MC. The tag "Invincible" should tell you enough. Wills reading I didn't really find any forms of misspelling, yet take that as a grain of salt because english is my fourth learned lenguage. Yet after finishing reading more than 500 fanfictions of more than 30k words at minimum each and more than 30 long chapter novels in my time... well, this novel is actually on the above the 70%

    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Kuroky_Zen

    Exactly, an illusion. On DC, the joker on most cases became "mad" after learning the truth of the world. He didn't become mad because of some tragic backstory or anything like that... but he became "mad" because he hated the fake world. Everything was scripted, everything was made for entertainment. He knew the truth of the world, and he hated it. The world was fake, an illusion... and only he was smart enough to notice... till he meet batman. His delusion with batman on those comics steams from the fact that joker believes that if anyone can see how fake their existance is, it is batman... hence his obssetion with the bat.

    "Because, seriously, I start to feel like this world is an illusion."
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to BlackPhoenix007

    Gear five? Sun Nikka mode :D

    "You can discuss this with Rob san. since Rob san has forbidden us from sacrificing our children we have no other choice."
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to faeeeee

    Don't really like how he went around searching for "beauties" beforehand but gonna give it props that the "harem" took quite a long time to become official, which is something I like. Not jumping into the whole "hump anything that moves/looks beautiful" is good enough in my book... have seen enough novels/fanfiction where the MC meets new girl, she falls for him three lines after meetting him then becomes part of harem and would be lucky to get one token paragraph to show she exist every 40 chapters. This... this atleast didn't jump to harem that fast and let the first relationship solified and grow. Now here is hoping things don't devolve into something worse in the future. This novel is LIT!

    The more Rob heard, the wider his smile, he didn't expect things to turn out so much faster than he had expected.
    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Commented

    In early chapters it is cannon that HELL exists, hence they even make a movie about it AND there is a bleach sequel which we will now focus on hell. Hueco Mundo isn't Bleach's hell, more like limbo. Where souls that didn't pass away to heaven(shinigami) or hell(well... hell) go to.

    This was hell in the world of Bleach!
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to booty_eater_22

    ... ... god damn it, i can actually see such a thing happening with the way the author is towing his story. The wish to just quit intensifies.

    "Exactly."
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Commented

    That is just the thing, the way this dude says he is in love and how he continues "admiring" or "Wanting all pretty things" just doesn't mix. Either be a loyal dude with your wife and let the harem blindside you or just straight out speak to your wife about it. Jesus.

    In fact, only the very happy smile on his wife's face was enough for Rob.
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Ewan_Shin

    I remember playing a dragon ball game for ps2 back in the days(around 2005 or 2007?) in which goku, vegeta, goten, trunks(kid) could use fusion with ANY other character. It was downright hilarious.

    At this moment, something mysterious happened within Rob's soul, as if two people were merging into one, Rob's soul became brighter as if her level had risen to better than just an ordinary soul.
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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Replied to Aishiya007

    ... ... chapter 200+ and everything becomes trash. Scumbag? He rapes, stoles from other guys, mind controls, mind fucks, drugs, and just straight out make eye contact and get the girl... ... the premise is good, the... whole other stuff? No.

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    Betoran1yr
    Replied to DaoisttG3KuY

    Why is this here? How is this a review? Can we report this?

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  • Betoran
    Betoran1yr
    Posted

    Gonna be honest here, the premise? Is was a good one. A multiversal chat group with adventures in other know worlds and putting to the front not just the MC but those other characters to act on other "fictions"... it really seems incredible. But, then you have this novel.... it began quite nicely, after all. The protagonist comes from a very... controversional anime in which there was a lot of romance drama. So that was to be expected. Yet, this novels fails to live up to its expectations. Grammar mistakes starts showing more frecuently the deeper you reach. The "characters" are just a footnote with no personality and on most cases only get ONE line just to show "oh yeah she/he exist" every 40 chapters. MC can't decide what he wants to be, either a sociopath or a savior who fell for the fate of the poor girl in front of him. He is not a alpha male, just an asshole. He gives cero fuck about any males. What is that? That kid is about to be run over by a car? He got his legs broken and was pushed in the road? Oh no! Wait, that is a BOY, nevermind. Let him be run over, he must learn from his mistakes... THEN 30 chapters later he sees a girl about to fall from a building in which she was HOOPING at the sides of the roof blindfolded, singing and suddenly MC says "oh no! that girl is about to die! i must save her!"... oh and this girl suddenly falls for the mc and becomes one of his "womans" who we will never see again. The "novel" have no plot or trama. It's just a endless loop of "new girl appears in mc world -> chat quest ->world hoping -> meet other girl in other world -> finish quest -> return home world -> make sweet love to new girl or go dates -> repeat process." MC even has the gal to go and say to the girls he meet "i'm not seeing anyone" or "nah imma single"... even though in his WORLD he has fucked 40 girls, is dating 50 other world girls, and has called so many others "my true love".... This novel give the world "man" a bad name. There is wishfulfillment an then there is this trash in which MC is the only "male" that deserve to exist and all other males are pushed down by mc, get their girls stolen, and then told by the mc how much of trash they are for not being as perfect as he is. Mc acts as if he was a Sanji. Can't hurt girls, must protect them. Then he devolves into a male that has no problem raping, mind controling, or using subtle tricks like pheromones or drugs to get the girls... then changes his personality again, what is that? I don't kill girls? F that. MC kills any girl that so much as glare his way... unless they are "important characters"... even though he already said he does not know the world he is in, or who is a important character he just kill all cannon fodder and takes all named female waifus. An example of what happens MANY times: MC enters a world, finds something that peaks his interest... what is that? This thing is important and can save billions of life? Meh, not MY problem, sound like a you problem. This thing is shiny and I want it. *random heroine appears* Oh yeah, this thing can save this world and taking it would be bad? Here, take this thing and save the life of the people. Cause lifes are more important than my curiosity. *random heroine fall for mc for being so selfless and heroic* Yeah... this is the plot right here.

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