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TomCat3mthCommentedwho said all this? a) a player who is very diligent in uncovering the game b) an author of a particular novel
*A well positioned arrow during a hunt will wield better rewards as opposed to merely hunting it down using a sword...*- TomCat3mthCommented
*winks at the author* i see what you did there...
'And the best way to do that is by building a connection with the 'main character' of Resko's storyline!' - TomCat3mthCommented
An elder?? really? I would say that the author needs to research about the reputation levels more thoroughly. No offence
You have achieved the next Reputation threshold! You are now an Honorary Elder! - TomCat4mthCommented
U got all the time in the world to explain dear author
That shout is called 'Elemental Fury'... speed related... no time to explain. - TomCat4mthCommented
I had to read that line a few times to understand what he was saying
I banished the Churls immediately, Dremora and their damn bride. - TomCat4mthCommented
Whenever says a song, I just play it in my spotify when reading this, and I gotta say, it keeps up the vibe
My man 👉😏👉 - TomCat4mthCommented
Thats one way to say it..😚😚
This is one of the most difficult ways to cast magic! Simply speaking, one may have enough Magicka but can't apply this number of runes on his own so he/she borrows the runes made by another caster. But as the runes will be split, the control will be split too, so everyone needs to synchronize the Magicka flow with the other or the spell will crumble. - TomCat4mthCommented
better let the blood-red eyed lady change it... lol
[A/N: Should I change it from little Jon to Cronos?] - TomCat4mthCommented
I think sham, as in a setup
The king of course won, what a sham. - TomCat4mthCommented
as... (moye moye)
After training we went back to the inn as. - TomCat4mthReplied to Jack_Smith_4368
breif----> brief
[A/N: That was the most brife verson of the story. There was more but I can't really write it all here, If I am mistaken somewhere point it quietly] - TomCat1yrCommentedCh 17 PROGRESS
- TomCat1yrReplied to just_an_extra1
1. "Reversed Fate: Escaping the Land of Survival" 2. "Inked Dimensions: Trapped in the Villain's Plot" 3. "The Writer's Undoing: Condemned to Frey's Fate" 4. "Tainted Pages: A Writer's Transmigration" 5. "From Author to Outcast: Unraveling the Land of Survival" 6. "Villainous Redemption: Escaping the Shadows of Frey" 7. "The Author's Dilemma: Trapped in the Land of Survival" 8. "The Pen's Curse: Traversing the Tale of Frey" 9. "The Forbidden Chapter: A Writer's Reckoning" 10. "Breaking the Narrative: Freedom from the Land of Survival"
- TomCat1yrReplied to just_an_extra1
- TomCat1yrPosted
Author, keep up the good work...😊 This novel is very good. I have read all the chapters released till now and I am eagerly waiting for more updates. Still, I just wanted to point out a few things... ➡️Firstly, it would be good if you can specify whenever he changes masks and that too which masks. It would also be good if you can point out the different facial features of these masks. I am taking the liberty to believe that you have read Lord of the Mysteries... It's just that in that novel, its clearly explains that various ways an imposter can be found out... So, it would be good if Cain sets different personalities as well as different names and Pokémon for each identity. He needs to always make sure that none of the disguises are traced back to him. ➡️Secondly, I found something interesting in the novel, I don't know whether it's a loophole or if it's intentional, but did Cain in his past life in the Pokémon world, not find any identity forgers, that he had to rely on Team Rocket for the entire thing? Well, for a man who wants freedom it really doesn't suit though, as he could definitely be tracked by Team Rocket, right? Again, believing that you have read LOTM, it would be better if you take inspirations from that and properly create a backstory for each of Cain's identities that he will be using in the future. A person with a backstory with careless loopholes is more suspicious than a person with no backstory. A suitable backstory with simple answers provided for questions that might or might not arise in a person when reviewing a person's past is better. The questions in that person's mind should be answered so that he/she doesn't go forward with the questions and think too much. ➡️Thirdly rather than a problem, more like something to be careful of, since Cain has psychic abilities now and they have been revealed to Sabrina of all people, it would be better if he has an item or something that can conceal his psychic abilities, so that people don't connect between his identities. So, showcasing this ability for his main identity as Cain, and his main Association Identity which is known by Team Rocket would be better. Afterall, there are not so many psychics out there in the world right? what are the chances that a group of remarkable people having the same height and seemingly same Pokémon are all psychics. This fact alone would restrict him a lot. I sincerely hope you are not offended by anything I said above, as these are just my honest opinions about the novel. Whether to take note of them or to simply ignore them is entirely up to you as I am not the one writing the novel. Anyway, I wish you best of luck for the success of your novel.👍👍👍 (ps. sincerely appreciate the fact that all the chapters are free as I am broke💕)