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author, I love you very much for the time we have been together but, BUT, giving him a shotgun as a weapon is very crazy, the standard is a 9 mm semi-automatic, you cannot (the truth is you can because it is your novel) give him a weapon that they use in operations against cartels (in Mexico) or gangs
He cannot learn the 4000 years of Chinese martial arts in less than 10 years at most and also the protagonist is not a Kenpo master, he is a master of martial arts combining all the ones he managed to learn (some he did not master) and the arts. Chinese martial artist learned xiaolin (that of redirecting)
Y are a god of magic now
Ah, my dear author, sometimes I think that you like describing houses or cars more than writing the story, but no jokes aside, this chapter can be summarized in: “look, my villa is expensive and has the latest technology” which is fine but I want to see the ties of the protagonist with his friends, family and partner. but I will still be here even if I am the last reader🗿
Lambo
True heroes live tragic and suffering lives.
Will he have Emiya's magic? or something similar, say yes please
I like you author, I really like you, and let's be honest, to be a novel of complete fulfillment of wishes, at least in some things you do them well, for example, what I think would be the relationship with Cin Haley, although I would like more if you talked about the protagonist's family either there is an arc or at least 2/3 chapters about haley meeting her family
I liked the chapter but every time they called themselves “husband” and “wife” it gave me an epilectic attack, I understand that it is because the Japanese call themselves “husband” and “wife” that way but I still think it is better to say it "honey" and "darling" type, but it's still my unimportant opinion
Thanks autor-san
Thank you very much author, I was looking for a destiny novel and this one just appeared, thank you very much