cliffhanger every chapter

how convenient ._.

character dialogue is full of mistakes and sometimes sounds like it was written by a 4y old. does anyone even read it? sometimes it doesn't even make sense. other than that writing is ok. the story is developing at a pretty decent past whit lots of twists and turns but it's basically the general trope of "I got reincarnated whit superpowers that aren't explained very well and can do anything and nothing poses a problem to me" The character design is ok, the characters are likeable but pretty generic. update stability seems good. and not a lot is present for the world background.

the story isn't going in any clear direction and the characters are discarded and non-important, they show up once and we get a bit of an info dump on them and they either die or make no impact on the story. the only thing keeping the mc alive is plot armour and some things that are happening make no logical sense. we didn't get a lot of world-building and the one we got is all over the place. last updated: 1 month ago.