Still not fixed?

That's good to hear. You should really decide for using just one point of fiew like 1st person or 3rd person and stick to that. The switching between those makes it difficult to read. But great story so far. Keep going. 👍🏻

Thx

Thanks for the chap

I kinda don't like how Mc is kinda not even willing to try helping the other people even when he clearly has the ability to at least try and survive. Kinda seems like heiß the cold hearted person even though the author claims otherwise. But apart from that great story so far. 👍🏻

Maybe in the next chapter?

Looking forward to the next chapters. 😁

Yeah but sadly a bit expensive to purchase everything at once. 😅

I agree. What was done to Peter would break almost anyone. Only those of a really strong willpower could be able to withstand such a Form of torture. Which most people of our day and society seem to forget to consider.

Liked it so far. Hope it gets picked soon.

This sounds like those gourds meant to cultivate poisons. And several of those together to be put in another one to take it even further. 🤔😅

Top. 👍🏻

Looking forward to the monthly tournament then. 😁

Hm how they always try to eat each other...🤣

Straight cannibalism... 🤔😅

Dang nice gif. 🤣👌🏻

OK I couldn't understand half of the chapter and when it was in English sometimes the wording seemed a bit odd. It definitely still needs some work but seemed interesting for a start.

Quite an interesting story to read, although it seems like the author didn't put any work into researching how guns (speed of sound and bullets for example) work. But if you are able to ignore that point, you'll be having a nice read here.

The annoying rating got me there. 😅

Thanks for the chapter