Vengeful_Slave
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You don't really have to put plot A and B in the same chapter as you have a stable and good update frequency so it doesn't really matter whether you put them in the same chapter or different chapters. And good job man you are doing great keep it up.❤️
I'm not saying Asuma is good, but he isn't bad either as Asuma can teach him goof fire ninjutsu and kinjutsu as Sasuke has the sharingan. And kakashi will probably fail such a team as they have no teamwork sure you might say he can't fail someone from the Hyuga, Uchiha and Inuzuka clan, but he probably won't care. Any way we will see why the author does that soon probably.
I don't even know what to say. This turned out to be much more than what I expected. Especially the character development is totally unique and like a breath of fresh air. The other characters don't feel like a one dimensional character but genuinely real characters with different personalities and opinions. The updates are consistent. The grammar is impeccable. I am speechless. Absolutely recommended. ❤️❤️
Honestly it's pretty good. The only flaw that I feel is it wasn't very clear in the beginning that he was kind of really a child that just has other world knowledge but the character development on the way when we reach about ch 30 or 35 and compare his character to the beginning there is a pretty big change in personality any ways absolutely recommended.