need more chapters 😸
Ok so first of all, I think that it's a great idea to write a novel on as well as the grammar is not a problem. What I would like to add though would be that you could phrase your words better....
Hello everyone, fellow reader here. The synopsis looks good and the language is not bad either... The synopsis is awesome and I hope the author finishes the story...
Well, the main plot has finally been set! Thank god it has started... I would die reading the back story... Overall the novel's really nice. The grammar is above average but can be improved... I hope the author continues this book... thanks
Dear reader, Let me tell you the tip of the iceberg. The 9 years later is as per him, is it true that it had been 9 years? I believe you should read the further chapters to find it out! This is all I can say to you...
The synopsis is quite interesting when I read it, there suspense is also nice, the vampire elements added in it is quite good. Keep on writing novel's like this!
ohh, there is a maple tree but the maple I meant was a piece of cloth...
Dear reader, maple means a piece of cloth and Seraph's weapon of death is in fact a piece of cloth thus the name...
" It's just what he thought, some things are better if they don't make sense " I said with a smile on my face.
The synopsis is just awesome, you have a way with words... I hope you keep writing regularly and let us readers read it happily.. overall everything is just fine until now
Respected reader, The process for cultivation is not like that. Please read chapter 4 for understanding the cultivation process... Thank you
About the background built, I request you to note this sir; the boy is still in hospital and the story is still on its 4th chapter, I request you to atleast read a bit further chapters once it releases and if there's still anything amiss then please do tell me about it.