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ObstinateFalcon

ObstinateFalcon

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You see me.

2021-11-16 JoinedIndia
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon5mth
    Posted

    Though there's not a lot to go on rn, this is pretty good so far. I can say I haven't seen a starting plot like this, so I'd say it uniquely crafted as well. I like the mc, she's feisty and intelligent. What really gets my gear going, though, is the auxiliary chapter. I can tell the author put a lot of stuff into the power system and worldbuilding, so I'm really looking forward to see all that come to fruition! Overall, recommended read.

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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon9mth
    Posted

    There's only three chapters as of now, so there's not much to go on. Regardless, the book has potential. The story aims to have an interesting take on tech and magic, which it does quite beautifully. Though there were some minir errors here and there, it's not enough to detract the reader from the story. Overall, it seems to be a story with a great structure, and an even greater potential.

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    The Magi-Tech Academy
    Sci-fi · ThyGreat_Hypoxis
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon9mth
    Posted

    First and foremost, let's start off by saying there's many novel things about this...novel. It is a pirate story—something I have never come across in my many days of scrolling through Webnovel. On top of that, it's clear that the author is experienced in storytelling, and that is not only visible from the impeccable grammar and prose, but also from the way the story itself is weaved. Rarely do I ever come across a writer with such abundant(and visible) knowledge in the craft, and hence, consequently met one too many inexperienced writers on the platform. This is a breath of fresh air I did not expect when clicking to read a novel with such a small reader base. I hope the author keeps up the regular chapter releases–as is always the case–and stay true to the compass as she navigates the seas to get to the booty! Highly recommended!

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    My Pirate Wives
    Fantasy · IkuSaari
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon9mth
    Posted

    When i first want to write, my english did cause me problems. In Soviet Russia i was strong teacher, my english i know is the best in all of Petropavlovsk. My brother, Mikhail, he say to me, "Falcon you go to America, they make you rich like czar, take many woman as lover, kill many bear". My brother, he is very wise, is greatest toymaker in all of Russia. So next day i wake up, sell my house, say goodbye to wife and children, and go to America to become millionaire. Then in America, I go to job interview and they say to me "Falcon, you are not for the job here, you are not the skills we need, your english is poor like child". I take that man and smash his table, i say "someday i will be greatest man in all of country, your children will wish me their father!". That day my anger is best of me. It is then i know i must learn better english, so i buy book "English Grammer it is for Dummies" by Mr.Woods. Now i am perfect english grammer! One day, I reading books and came across most famous writer. I read book as i stare at rain outside, where they usually keep the rain. Anyway, I now become personal editor of the world most famous author. I can now say success like borat. Thank you, very recommend.

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    ENKEM'OL : Future Project
    Sci-fi · ForbiddenMe
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon9mth
    Commented

    Tense switch. Would be better if it went like "One could tell from his..."

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    Villain Is on Vacation
    Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon9mth
    Posted

    Quite stellar. It stands out from the mainstream because it is a short story that can be read in a few minutes. That is not to say it misses out on delivering anything a good book should deliver. Wrestling with the struggles of life and growth, it shows the beautiful emotions that encompass that journey—hate, joy, regret, etc. and manages to deliver them in staccato blows. A great and long story that spans a life time, delivered in a simple and short story format.

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    A Flawed Mother
    Teen · slowpokeChaos
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    He’s saying it’s nice that Gary is having a character development and has strengthened his mind after his previous encounter.

    Ch 15 -Krahang-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Mweheheh

    On top of that, this would be a test to see how Charlotte and Gary performed in a stressful situation.
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Haha, correct both ways

    I arrived at the outer ring to find Quinn. I knocked on the door, entering upon not getting any response, to find him sitting cross legged on the floor. I could see him grow noticeably, which was a pleasant surprise as this meant his talent was not meagre.
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    I haven’t decided that bit, but it might swing similarly :)

    Ch 12 -Follow-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Hehe, let’s see

    Ch 11 -Quinn-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Commented

    Hehe, let’s see

    Ch 11 -Quinn-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Yes, he is a noble. Documents are not really a thing in this day and age, especially if most awakeneds can just climb walls most of the time to get into cities. And yes, whether his father actually knows about his whereabouts and identity are unknown

    Ch 9 -Noble-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Thanks for the review nii-sama!

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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to hyemi_m

    Thanks for the review!

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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to hyemi_m

    How a villain builds a kingdom. And thanks!

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    Draft123
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Aptly put!

    'A chess piece or a chess player? It doesn't matter if all events up to here were your plans, father. Now that I know I am on a chessboard, this will not happen again.'
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    Let’s see~

    Ch 3 -Decision-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to hyemi_m

    Hello, I finally published the book. Could you repost this review on the published book?

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    Draft123
    Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
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  • ObstinateFalcon
    ObstinateFalcon1yr
    Replied to izayoi_nii

    As there should be :D

    Ch 1 -Creating A Vase-
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    How A Villain Builds A Kingdom
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