darkv01dkai
just endless nothingness that eats and eats and never gains mass are weight just …nonexistence itself
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His palms where sweaty , nees wake , arms are heavy ,vomit on his sweater MOMS- not going to finish it but u can guess
Not trying to hate but this is the most Generic ,cliche mid High school dxd fiction out. everyone is just trying to copy everyone. it’s just all the some and let’s be honest the only reason most people read DXD fiction is because of the harem tag and because u are all degenerates with no love life and the only true love u have ever felt in ur life is from ur mother so I well ask again please do something new.👌🏿
Did he forget he had a symbiot 🤨
oh it abomination
ok that makes no sense because the whole point of the slash skill he has is to past through any defense for example he literally cut though gojo's infinity and u think steel skin is stronger than literal infinity ... please tell me this is just him dreaming or something
please tell me he is dreaming ?
yep i know but the problem is him suplexing it
i ok found a better it's like a ant's trying to lift up your foot .🤷🏿♂️
true but I don't know any better ones 🤷🏿♂️
that still doesn't make any sense even if doom guy is strong enough to lift up a sun he is still smaller that a Titan so how tf would his hands be able to go around the titan waste to suplex it 🤨 that's like a ant's lifting a peace of food ten times wider than it's whole body 🤷🏿♂️
ok here we go. the concept is good the writing is not bad but the grammar is mid and the character's personality's are missed up like Gwen is supposed to be a cool chill funny girl that loves band music but in this she just act likes Evey other anime girl and her only redeeming quality is that she is spider woman and the main character too . sometimes he is cool but must of the time he is just cringe as all hell and there is practically no world building at all . and why are u puting so many unnecessary big words in this. well this is just my thoughts if u like it u like it I am just saying u can do better so don't stop writing king /queen 🤷🏿♂️well byeee 👋
Yamamoto
why is he so emo bro is the legendary edge lord 💀