Review Detail of darkv01dkai in Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

ok here we go. the concept is good the writing is not bad but the grammar is mid and the character's personality's are missed up like Gwen is supposed to be a cool chill funny girl that loves band music but in this she just act likes Evey other anime girl and her only redeeming quality is that she is spider woman and the main character too . sometimes he is cool but must of the time he is just cringe as all hell and there is practically no world building at all . and why are u puting so many unnecessary big words in this. well this is just my thoughts if u like it u like it I am just saying u can do better so don't stop writing king /queen 🤷🏿‍♂️well byeee 👋