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In my native language his name is harold, so I got used to calling him like that.
My bad, I didn't pay attention. I will correct this. Sorry for that.
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate the gesture enormously. I started writing as a first step towards learning English, which explains the unnatural conversations. I am trying to improve and make progress. I hope you will join me on this journey and continue to give me advice. Regarding the first-person point of view, I was trying to bring a new perspective, but nothing important would be covered from any point of view other than William's. This approach is rare; it's meant to add a bit of freshness and explain the main character's actions without him having to do it himself. Thank you again for your comment.
Thank you for the constructive comment.
Thanks for the chapter. For the joker film you can make several sequels: in the 1st film like the original one. the 2nd is about joker who joins the criminal world and he is at the bottom of the ladder of his gang which he freed from the police in the 1st and film where he will learn to become a real criminal and he increases in hierarchy. And finally in the third film he rebels and conquers the entire city, he becomes the king of the American underworld with potentially the Kingpin of Marvel under his orders.
Consider the idea of acquiring Nintendo during the 1992 crisis to safeguard Mario from potential adversaries. Additionally, there's the potential to develop Sonic (1991)and Yu-Gi-Oh! (1996), not to mention the inclusion of EA in the mix.