Not sure there taking a break at the moment so it’s probably going to be a bit

Even if you don’t like more light hearted stories like this I’d still recommend reading this one sense while it depends on the fandom, overall story’s like this are very rare sense you lessen the familiarity of the world (which is why this type of story is more common in fiction like Naruto sense they still got the great ninja wars as a focal point) this generally means you can take the story into multiple directions you otherwise couldn’t while also exploring the world in a unique way. P.S. Authors got balls and I’m looking forward to how this story develops

Seems to have worked themselves out so a break is understandable so I’d say check periodically for when they come back

When I say collar I’m talking about the shirt collar if you’re wondering think a cross between blues outfit and the white team rocket executive uniform

The drawing itself is 10/10 but I can’t help but feel it doesn’t fit in Pokémon (to anime boy) while it does fit the author’s description of the mc ‘black hair, red eyes and white clothes’ it doesn’t really have any distinctive features that most gym leaders and above have. I’d say add a little more color to the clothes keep white as the main color but add some black and light blue as supporting colors ((just look at Cynthia mainly black with bit of silver and yellow) the black to help show there pseudo twin dynamic while the blue is a nod to his favorite Pokémon being shiny umbreon) I’d say tighten up the clothes and add a black collar to make his red eyes more prominent, light blue shoes and maybe a bracelet on one wrist and a black belt he keeps his poke balls on

Interesting premise I don’t think I’ve seen a Pokémon story where most of the notable characters are young and not in the positions we remember them at, story’s written well and has good pacing info dumps are bite sized and are only used to explain things that have happened or clarify to avoid confusion while helping flesh out the world, character design is good to you can get a pretty going visual of previous gym leaders

Hmmm… well guess I’ll be that guy. 1: While you’re entitled to your own opinion I have to disagree with this one, I really don’t think it’s that fast passed it’s easily to tell what’s going on and where more so explaining things as they happen to avoid big info dumps so it keeps an even pace the beginning being the only real exemption do to the story trying to get to the adventure part and even then it still takes just enuf time to get its bearings 2: the vast majority of Pokémon in the story are from Sinnoh with three exceptions being a Bulbasaur witch was catched in a catching contest where Pokémon from different regions had the highest price, Bagon which came from an unidentified egg that was either implied to have come from a different region or was out right said (can’t remember which) and a Alolan Vulpix… yeah I can’t explain this one but given the fact that poachers are a thing (ones been shown in this story already) a flashback or story arc related to this could easily fill in this plot hole 3:…….. I’ve seen to have forgotten the third one was

There friend probably got them to take a break, they have done over forty chapters in this story alone not including any others they have within a month

Maybe the mc and Cynthia have had some cute moments together (mostly pseudo twins being pseudo twins) Besides I’m already shipping those two but if it happens in the story then it’ll probably be a good while with how young they are (12) even if they do act older than they are

Didn’t the Raikage and B already see his face or did I miss understand the end of A’s spar with Ken

Tonks for me

Quick question are going to give monsters the mad enhancement skill (as in a basic requirement) because I think it works really well it could be the fundamental deference between xenos and monsters and why surface monsters are inherently weaker then the dungeon one i.e. lower grade enhancement

Morgen maybe but we’re like two years from canon and another from the O.E.B.D. so unless the story goes on for a couple of years after that (most likely dungeon diving to the bottom) Artoria then will be to young.

If Artoria doesn’t have Avalon then she’ll age so are we getting the saber or lancer version/body

Yeeeeeeeeeeessssssss finally I have been making a bloody trench thank you…. I’ll go read now

Sorry if this seems a bit disorganized but I wanted to ask about two things One, how the heck is Bell going to kill the Behemoth even half dead with no workable limbs (I also doubt Asfi didn’t tell the crew to shoot the head) it still takes a good level 5 to damage that thing significantly so unless the cores exposed it will be quite literally impossible and even then he’s going to need to dig it out of the body to save the spirit without putting it in significant danger. Two, I understand trying to keep human characters from being overly populated in the story but don’t you think Cu should have been the canolop (not going to bother naming the species cerectly) instead of Schahch like how his title of the hound of whatever nation he was defending interacted with the universal transfer.

But this is a crusade against the author not eachother

Probably wait I mean he’s probably going to want a update on what happened in Orario while he was gone so.

I’m just wondering how their going to do the upkeep

Pretty sure he’s 15 at this point canon is two or three years late remember