Review Detail of Stormonix in Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)
Review detail
i am by no means an expert in this but i have read many, and i mean many fanfics in this app and outside of it, and this fic feels pretty average, not terrible but also not great. The story is fast paced that i think i will forget what happened in just a day, like there's not even like a training stuff just some time skip then bam something evolved, there's also stuff with how their pokemon get caught it feels kinda force, so yeah fast paced. The dialogue also feels robotic sometimes dunno how to explain this it just feels like it to me. So all in all read it if you're just passing time and have nothing better to do . there may have some like fast paced tags in it and people may like counter well achktually me but oh well you win some you lose some.
Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)
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Hmmm… well guess I’ll be that guy. 1: While you’re entitled to your own opinion I have to disagree with this one, I really don’t think it’s that fast passed it’s easily to tell what’s going on and where more so explaining things as they happen to avoid big info dumps so it keeps an even pace the beginning being the only real exemption do to the story trying to get to the adventure part and even then it still takes just enuf time to get its bearings 2: the vast majority of Pokémon in the story are from Sinnoh with three exceptions being a Bulbasaur witch was catched in a catching contest where Pokémon from different regions had the highest price, Bagon which came from an unidentified egg that was either implied to have come from a different region or was out right said (can’t remember which) and a Alolan Vulpix… yeah I can’t explain this one but given the fact that poachers are a thing (ones been shown in this story already) a flashback or story arc related to this could easily fill in this plot hole 3:…….. I’ve seen to have forgotten the third one was
