good start to a great story just explain why he has toki or battle spirit when he has the laplas factor

it's a great read just don't make the mc so broken that he can solo a dragon and while on the adventure add more pov of the other characters thank you

it has a good story good character can be more developed it has a good part system overall highly recommended

Just perfect just a great story overall in my opinion

Can you add interplanetary migration marvel ha many spaces faring aliens like the cree ship that got abandoned at earth

just rating and hoping for a good read .....

im just here giving support and experience a good read

thanks for the chap and welcome back

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It's ............................................... good and worth it to read😁

Great story the pacing is abit fast for me other than that it's fun to read highly recommend

Authorsan make kise zone much shorter than the rest of GOM for the reason of he doesn't have the body composition he compensate with stamina and concentration and great story 🏆🏆🏆

Please author san makeup your mind if his a gray character give us his thoughts process on why he did it and if his a good guy then his a hypocrite and i quote it's all for the greater good stuff and please consider when you introduce a character to the story add a little depth even Alexander Pierce is a more interesting character than magnito a major villein it feels more like a random mob who gut face slap from a yong master that's all i to rant i love the story as whole it's just interaction with the x men is kinda awkward and you still have other mcu characters like make quick silver meet at wow or give them their pov the story does not always need to be about the mc you will alway runout of ideas that way experiment to improve before you go to naruto like you expect assassin's spy's racist people who had been murdering each other for the past 100 years or more and also brainwashed hate each other and just came together and have fun that's all i think😁

just supporting the author best of luck🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆

it's pretty much perfect ..................

I have been loving reading this fanfic it has a good story plot development is nice and character's have common sense over all it's a good read highly recommend

thank for the chapter snd for giving normal folks power you can introduce a kind of carma or points system where there action in the game or in the real world either bad or good get points and the more positive points someone have the more they can awaken ability that they have in the game. like the carma points range 1 to 100 or -1 to 100 at level 10 basic physical for warriors like 20kg or something and basic magic for wizards like they can make a bottle worth of water or something you get the gist of it hope it helps