Ki_je
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Fairly certain the author is a pedophile. He writes in depth sex chapters for young teenagers, which is by all means very weird for a grown man to describe in detail. Overall writing quality, story, and pacing is very mid, nothing too special. However, in depth chapters of kids fornicating is again quite weird. I have a sneaky suspicion that this author is also a Josh Giddey enjoyer. This concludes my review.
The incessant use of obscene imagery ruins the story. The author comes off as an excessively h*rny child who feels that it is necessary to have strings of chapters detailing his hentaiesque fantasies. At times, the author would write up to 10 consecutive chapters essentially describing and dragging on the h*rniness of the characters, leaving an impression to the reader that they are reading nothing more than soft p*rn. Blood Warlock has a good plot and direction but its story is undermined and to some degree overshadowed by the excessive and prolonged chapters of lascivious dialogue. Although the novel at its core is enjoyable, these elements ruin the web novel.
The relationship feels too rushed and contrived. Been like 3 months since they met and a one month period of her being gone. Wish the author wouldâve made The relationship progression more realistic.