The incessant use of obscene imagery ruins the story. The author comes off as an excessively h*rny child who feels that it is necessary to have strings of chapters detailing his hentaiesque fantasies. At times, the author would write up to 10 consecutive chapters essentially describing and dragging on the h*rniness of the characters, leaving an impression to the reader that they are reading nothing more than soft p*rn. Blood Warlock has a good plot and direction but its story is undermined and to some degree overshadowed by the excessive and prolonged chapters of lascivious dialogue. Although the novel at its core is enjoyable, these elements ruin the web novel.
XIETIAN
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