I'm cool with it cause it seemed too sudden and unpolished. But in the end, it's up to you where to take the story. I'll still read it.

No rush take your time to work it out properly.

It would be interesting if the 100th floor and the 3 great quests cleared leads to a portal or gateway to another sub world or completely new worlds. Don't know if it's Canon but, hey, a man can dream.

Thank you for giving us the opportunity to read this. It has been a blast and is one of the best fanfcs I've read.

thanks for the chapter

I wonder, why not use the champion position to start a supposed investigation in oak finances and reveal his true face? like to see it but the elite 4 probs won't let it happen

thanks for the chapter

the suspense is killing me and thanks for the great chapter

excited to see how the plot plays out

This is being dragged for way too long and why can't the MC go all out instead of holding back, especially now?

keep it and improve the quality next but if you're not happy with how the chapters came out and want to rewrite I have no problem.

The suspense is killing me. But thanks for the chapter.

thanks for an amazing chapter

This all feels so dragged out and unnecessary. Just get to the point.

Wishful thinking but, I would like to see the so called 'heroes' lose the very thing that makes them heroes, their sacred gears. None should be spared.

This is being dragged out longer than necessary and at some point you're going to have to have the MC kill and understand that mercy is not an option in the cruel world of DxD.

One tragedy after another. Imma go cry now. 😢

As of this review. the ff is simply too good to not read. The writing, the grammar, the progression, the character development. It's all so well written. well paced and every good thing in a ff. Hope to see it continue and end. Big shout out to the author for the masterpiece and keep up the amazing work.

5

we getting yandere Thalie?