If you can't even get money without the help of the interface, then I'm sure that 'someone' wouldn't be too bummed out when you actually die. They'll just get someone better I guess.

Yup, very big inspiration. In fact, for the first few chapter, it's basically a copy. I made this because I recently read fake red and I really felt it's a shame that it got cancelled.

Yup, a ver big inspiration from Spiderman Fake Red. I just felt it's a shame for it to end early because the manag got cancelled due to insufficient sales.

Writing Quality(3 star)- It's readable, and there are only a few grammar mistakes. I would have given it a four star but sometimes, the author gives very long info dumps that isn't necessary and his descriptions really can't make you visualize well because it's has little descriptions. I also don't like the fact that he uses Shadow Spiderman instead of Spider Noir, which I'm sure he received comments about but the fact he didn't change it shows his laziness.Story Development(2 star)- I personally didn't like the development, the fact he revealed that all of them are just media in his world and the fact that even though he is an OC, he's barely contributing to the plot. It's something I personally don't like. Character Design(2 star): Since this is a fanfic, the character design should have been pretty high but the way the author writes the character feels one dimensional, so I made it lower. Plus, I don't really like the MC. I don't have problems with weak, cowardly, edgy, overpowered, or cool protagonists, what I do care about though is a bland and uninteresting character. That's what this MC is, he's very bland, his personality is not explored, we don't even know his motivations that much. Update Stability(Five Star): Uploads everydayWorld background(Five star): This is a fanfic, so I think it's perfect. Though the world itself in this fanfic isn't explored that much.

Do you really have to say she's seductive? She's a minor and the fact you mention seductive implies that Mark think she's seductive because even though it's from a third POV, it's still focuses on Mark's thoughts.

Oh, then he is somewhat emo. He is certainly gloomy and edgy, but his whole personality is not based around being it, he does show moments of compassion and empathy such as dancing for Kana. The manga is a different story though.

Manipulating his sister is canon tho? If you're trying to comment about how Aqua seems too emo in my fanfic, that's certainly true, because I didn't show his other side's yet, but him being like that toward Ruby is not something I did, it's canon.

Nope, he isn't. He's more human, there just wasn't enough chapters yet for me to show it yet.

Thanks, I feel really flattered and embarrassed by your compliment 😊

Well, he does go in a different path in the next few chapters. You can read those before deciding if you want to drop it.

I laughed reading the racist comments here because the people that left those comments are incrediblely stupid. Why is the MC being black supposed to be a problem? I don't care about your excuses of self-insertions, because I do it myself, and I have no problem inserting myself into them, I don't hate it at all. I mean, why should I? We're all humans at the end of the day and I don't see any people complaining when the Main Character is literally a different species like Elf, Dragons, Orcs, etc. Like bruh, you're not offended at inserting yourself in a character if it's a different species but you are when you insert yourself into a fellow human with different skin colours? That's not a problem of having a hard time immersing yourself into a character that's different from you anymore, because people can still immerse themselves if the MC is a different species, it's just a blatant display of racism.And I find it ironic that people are hating on a black Spiderman because Stan Lee once said that he made the costume of Spiderman fully cover his entire body to give hope to everyone and prove that anybody, regardless of race, anybody could be under that mask.

Aikara, he has more experience acting than Ai. Ai only acted for 8 eight years, while Aikara acted for dozens of years.

It's not necessarily because of Aikara's acting, it's because In Aqua's previous life, Ai talked about being a liar.

Do you not like the change? I'm not trying to be aggressive in asking, I'm just genuinely curious.

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Woah, that's some pretty strong hate if the first thing you do is comment about how you hate her. Do you mind me asking why you hate her?

Thanks for the review, I understand that everybody have different tastes, and I respect that. I'm really thankful you decided not to rate the novel purely one star just because of Ai's death. I hope you can find a nice fanfiction where Ai lives.

You should take into account Akasaka's co author who is Mengo, and his works are pretty messed up.

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