Kill her

I just came back to say fuck you bitch and your gayass novel.

Fucking clown world shit, don’t get fooled, you will be extremely disappointed.

Do you like simps main characters, that rescues bitches that got raw dog by goblins? If yes, you're going to love this novel.

Just looked at your readers there just a bunch of romance lovers. Everyone that came for the villain tag left long ago.🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅

THIS IS THE BEST FANIC of all time. No argue, please continue this master piece.

Again 🖕

Yes thank you for the clarification and I just want to let you know I’m a big fan. I only comment to novels I truly like because I want to see them improve, again thank for having such open mind to hear you readers opinion

Gain 🖕

I’m not talking about the dead son, no I’m taking about the dead son’s girlfriend. I know there is hall conspiracy about her death but seriously why would the clan leader punish the most likely leader to reach rank 7 just for a insignificant rank 3 clan member. And how does a rank 6 elder live for so long in a cultivation world and not have killed, this guy was terrified knowing MC killed a few mortals, is that the most evil thing he has seen in like the 3000 years his been alive. it outright laughable, and supposedly he could outright kill his children if their trash but can kill a random clansman. There is so much loopholes, I’m not trying to talk trash I’m just giving a conservative criticism to this novel because I love it and I see things that could later trouble the author like a rank 6 that have lived like 3000 years, and never having seen a murder.

This hall thing about a rank 6 cultivator can not kill a rank 3, it just ridiculous even if it a righteous force. This point just makes it so unrealistic, say a rank 1 could get a way with disrespecting a rank 6, why would they ever fear the strong or even want to strive to be stronger. of course People would want to increase their life span but some would be content with not improving and indulging themselves in riches and desires. In the end this force’s power would decrease and disappear in the river of time because the was no sense of crisis for the weak. Witch come back to my point earlier this is unrealistic even in the most righteous force, unless the leader where just stupid. Great chapter anyway, this just constructive criticism like you asked

Author I’m back I see your consistent, I respect ✊ that for real. Don’t ignore me author your favourite and biggest supporter is here. Even though you may not want to hear what I have to say sometimes.😔 I’m back baby I’m going to give up on this novel even if I have to fight you author 🤪

It too similar to RS😭

I’m mean don’t listen to female dating advice

Sorry for the spelling mistakes it night and I’m really sleepy 😴 and wanted to make my point

Great opening 👍

I know Gray doesn’t care and all but letting some Radom nobody walk all over him makes him look like some pussyboy. And then there is something about having that slut beside him all time even when she calls him master, it still kills the mood having that Bitch around him when his supposedly “evil”, nah men your contradicting yourself. And it not like his hitting it, that kitty cat🐱. Nope she is just like a cheerleader, her really reason for being left alive by the author is to makes the Mc Gray look cool for having a bitch around him and bringing him more trouble and keep the plot going.

Haha 😂 I hope the all die and if Gray jump in and save them, I will take back calling him evil. I also hope they don’t miraculous survive, because it would be cool to see a topical villain succeed in his evil plan without the mc messing it up.

😑😴 but good development, mech👍

But why did Gray forget about his ability