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Nice easy to digest chapter, probably readying up for some major action soon... just, better not be foreshadowing Colin's death, not this soon >:( jk

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An honest chapter, it gives such depth to the characters... and the author.

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Solid Chapter

love the chapters with fighting in it. the detail and imagery is top tier.

Added a character named Maeve, love it.

Colin should be referred to as Saint Valentine more often 😅

Been following this story for a minute now. The growth of not just the characters but the writing too has been outstanding. This has been an amazing read, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the great work, bro!

Best chapter yet

light chapter, after the last one, no real complaints

the pacing is starting to pick up, I'm just concerned it could be too fast. not sure yet

I don't mind his reaction, it does feel a bit contradictory to his behavior earlier. like of Kayman was more competitive that could've work just as well if not a little better.

Great Chapter, and Kody is starting to feel like Kakashi and I love it.

the dialogue was felt natural, and the pacing was great. one of your best chapters yet.

Much more natural exposition, excellent

This part feels... unnecessary (politely).

while, the instructor kind of feels a little out of nowhere, this is a great comeback. it feels mostly well paced, and the dialogue feels natural. I do feel personally, that at 15 chapters in, you don't have to show the entire list of stats anymore. Just the ones relevant to the chapter.