It is a good book with an interesting plot but the drawing needs to be improved on. I'm not criticising it or anything, I'm just giving my advice.
And good job on the comic
This comic is so lovely, it'll soon become my favourite comic. I just admire the plot, characters, drawing and the story in general
Keep Up The Good Work Author
I really enjoyed this comic. The drawing is wonderful. The characters are also wonderful. The way the story began was pretty exciting
Keep Up The Good Work Author