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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Replied to LucyFiction

    Man i wish you could have made english review, i always check for bad reviews first before giving new novel a try. Would have loved to know why you rated it bad.

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    Naked Sword Art
    Eastern · RaLegacy
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    fleit_askar9mth
    Replied to Minoaahh

    Sounds like Chatgpt Review

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    My Celestial Ascension
    Fantasy · LittleBastard879
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Commented

    If Sadist or whatever i love the way he is turning to be. hate driven revenge plots are the best juice out there to drink.

    And now, his spite for Ceti was feeding these flames, and he wanted her to know that her actions has a price. After seeing how much disdain she had for him, he suspected that she must be one of the people who tortured and made his life miserable when he was a helpless kid.
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Posted

    Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel. Premise amazing! Story? highly engaging! Action and battle scenes? Superb!! The Sauce?....beyond tasty. I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.

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    Valkyrie Smash
    Sci-fi · Nomanalive
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Posted

    A story that had promising start at the beginning but failing to grasp the reader throughout the first 20-30 chapters. Mainly failing due to character engaging with each other in hollow empty way, character actions being described in pretty shallow structure and mc acting in cringy hard to bear behavior taking into account both his lives expierences. "chapter 16" Archer feeling hungry and bringing out two meats scoffing them down. So much more could have been added to describe this. From the typical stomach growling to how the meat was prepared to last him or how it tasted..so on and so forth. This is authors first novel but i hate to take such fact into account to raise a review solely because of this factor alone. The very first couple of chapters are often the dealbreakers for readers, making it even more important for them to be well done.

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    A Journey That Changed The World.
    Fantasy · NegansPalace
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Replied to B0mbaCl0ck

    That seems hard to manage when the character trait of Riel you mentioned is sort of his main selling point too as MC. But i defintily agree, seeing the relationships be developed bit more and having more scenes where MC shows his love and care to the characters.

    Ch 81 Reward
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Commented

    I know this is just the beginning but its already getting tiring to see the Skills being quotted everytime while they have been mentioned already.

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    A Journey That Changed The World.
    Fantasy · NegansPalace
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Commented

    So he literally ripped the wolfs heart out? And ate it too? ....so humanoids as well? ...not sure how to feel about that.

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    A Journey That Changed The World.
    Fantasy · NegansPalace
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Commented

    its such pleasure to see you adding so much plot and story into playing music instruments and different musice titles MC plays. thanks for chap. hoping to see MC mom and sister hear his current amazing progress in music.

    Ch 80 New Sugar Mommies
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Commented

    Finally someone speaking the truth

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    Valkyrie Smash
    Sci-fi · Nomanalive
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Replied to Dao_of_tiddie

    ...what did i just see

    Kinks- Derogatory words, Rough Sex, BDSM, Anal.
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    Ero Meter
    Fantasy · roll_the_music
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  • fleit_askar
    fleit_askar9mth
    Commented

    YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESS My God i have been waiting so patiently for any new chapter lately!!! I dont know how you made the bridge from your 1 year break and connected back to your best work. On top of that you did it so well that the novel continues on better then when you have left for a break...absolutly mindblowing really. Does not mean i suggest you to take breaks to become better...please...like for godsake please. Your work one of my biggest gold nuggets i have been reading for long time now. Big big big fan of yours.

    A few minutes later, small applause rang out from the crowd. Mikael and Damien finished their duet, and bowed as they left the stage.
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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