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If Sadist or whatever i love the way he is turning to be. hate driven revenge plots are the best juice out there to drink.
A story that had promising start at the beginning but failing to grasp the reader throughout the first 20-30 chapters. Mainly failing due to character engaging with each other in hollow empty way, character actions being described in pretty shallow structure and mc acting in cringy hard to bear behavior taking into account both his lives expierences. "chapter 16" Archer feeling hungry and bringing out two meats scoffing them down. So much more could have been added to describe this. From the typical stomach growling to how the meat was prepared to last him or how it tasted..so on and so forth. This is authors first novel but i hate to take such fact into account to raise a review solely because of this factor alone. The very first couple of chapters are often the dealbreakers for readers, making it even more important for them to be well done.
That seems hard to manage when the character trait of Riel you mentioned is sort of his main selling point too as MC. But i defintily agree, seeing the relationships be developed bit more and having more scenes where MC shows his love and care to the characters.
I know this is just the beginning but its already getting tiring to see the Skills being quotted everytime while they have been mentioned already.
So he literally ripped the wolfs heart out? And ate it too? ....so humanoids as well? ...not sure how to feel about that.
Finally someone speaking the truth
...what did i just see
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESS My God i have been waiting so patiently for any new chapter lately!!! I dont know how you made the bridge from your 1 year break and connected back to your best work. On top of that you did it so well that the novel continues on better then when you have left for a break...absolutly mindblowing really. Does not mean i suggest you to take breaks to become better...please...like for godsake please. Your work one of my biggest gold nuggets i have been reading for long time now. Big big big fan of yours.