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Theo_Vol

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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1d
    Replied to Myrtle_S

    it can be a good argument but at the same time can be bad as well because if you have to read 60+ chapter and spend 2-4 hours to only be engaged to the story like what's the point. it's like the same analogy that I usually hear on MMORPG game "it take 200 hours for the game to be good" at that point why even spend that much time ?

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    Daily life of a cultivation judge
    Eastern · Daynightdreamer
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1d
    Posted

    i was intrigued by the synopsis and figure I could try it, so I read it. I only got to chapter 30, and from those chapter I can see that the character is enjoyable and I know what to expect when the synopsis says there will be extra's POV but from those 30 chapter i feel you gives to much explanation to everyone other than the MC. from those 30 chapter I only know that the mc is genius but will do anything to be lazy, but just from 1 passing case that i am pretty sure not gonna have a huge impact in the future other than advancing the plot I know how do the sect get created, why the sect is created there, what is the sect treasure, what is the fued between the creator of the sect and some evil organization, and that 1 elder that cultivate with pill that take about half of a chapter only to be killed ? (from what I get) a few chapter later. like what is the point of explaining that detail when the character is not gonna be around for long ? it's not like you're gonna get an attachment from that 1 elder. I am sure that there will be someone that like that kind of writing but for me it's just not my cup of tea

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    Daily life of a cultivation judge
    Eastern · Daynightdreamer
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol30d
    Commented

    it's alright that you take some time off to spend time with family have a good vacation

    Ch 17 life gets in the way
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    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1mth
    Commented

    nice chapter but, i keep having the same issue from before, i feel like i didn't know enough of the power systems at play to see how strong someone is, i don't know what is the difference of strength between rank 1 cultivator and rank 0, what it can do what it can't do. i feel like you just give the bare minimum explanation and expect us to understand the power systems. I hope you spent more time to explain more about your world rather than making the story progress by achieving point to point objective that one must do so the story can continue.

    Ch 14 First breakthrough(part 1)
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    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1mth
    Commented

    keep the good work

    Ch 11 Union/First climb
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    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1mth
    Posted

    although there's the typical reincarnation concept and the creating new world and becoming gods thing and the battle royale that are pretty common nowadays, i like the fact that the story didn't spend to much time on the fact the mc got reincarnated and stuff and move on, i also like that when the mc creating his own world, he's not going for the typical recreating earth civilization to the fullest with magic and stuff, I do kinda wish that the divinity, world core, and other stuff explained in more detail as I feel there's still a lack of how the power systems work. I hope it will be explained soon, that's pretty much what I see so far and liked from your novel. as long you keep consistent with your work and update I am pretty sure this novel can succeed keep up the good work

    altalt
    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1mth
    Commented

    a new hidden gems that i found keep up the good work

    Ch 9 Eliza
    altalt
    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1mth
    Replied to Hasan_Shopnil

    and after a pretty long hiatus too

    Ch 560 Surprise Inspection
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    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol1mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, but is it just me or this chapter price is 2 free pass ????

    Ch 59 59.
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    The Tycoon Inheritance
    Fantasy · Devoted_laurel
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol2mth
    Posted

    I've read all the chapter and I see some discrepancy here and there but didn't really bother me, keep up the good work !![img=recommend] as for the story its's self it's a pretty interesting story.

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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol2mth
    Commented

    thx for the chapter

    Ch 60 Cutting the Escape Route
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    One Piece: Ragnarok
    Anime & Comics · Ragnarok98
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol10mth
    Replied to Jerry_Murphy

    I bought coins and ends my free user experience for this

    Ch 277 Fist of the First Star
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    Pantheon Online
    Games · Antihero
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol10mth
    Commented

    no new updates ??

    Ch 277 Fist of the First Star
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    Pantheon Online
    Games · Antihero
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  • Theo_Vol
    Theo_Vol11mth
    Commented

    huh.... I came to like your writing because of your marvel game maker system, but when you suddenly stop updating it and promoting and updating this novel chapter after chapter, i read it to show my support but when you turn to privilege and locked chapter that's when I'll stop.

    Ch 41 41 - First Rank E Monster
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    GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM
    Games · NunuXD
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