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Month9mthCommentedAlright. AU or not, this is simply not Rebecca. From this point on I’ll just read with no brain.
She pulled him down, leaning back against his car as she kissed him once more. This time it didn't have the fire from earlier at the range, it was softer and slower, it escalating into a full french kiss as she let David play with her tongue, his hands on her waist as he lifted her a bit, pressing her into the car.- Month9mthReplied to Sir_Squirrel
Exactly lol. I assume it’s just because the author wants to establish a close relationship between David, Rebecca, and V, making this some some sort of father, mother, daughter thing. Still can’t help but cringe at the unrealisticness though.
Rebecca cursed beneath her breath as she stormed into the basement. - Month9mthReplied to BeaulenSmith2
Interesting. Even you don’t understand why you made her cry.
After a few minutes of silence, she said quietly. ''If you tell anyone I cried over that, I'll ice you.'' - Month9mthCommented
Again, not the way Rebecca would react to this situation. I can see her feeling bad for the girl, but crying? For real? She didn’t even cry when her brother died. I feel like you are creating scenes for a quick relationship boost between the two.
Hiccuping slightly as David pulled her forward, hugging her to his chest as he simply sat there beneath the hot water while holding her as she cried. - Month9mthCommented
Ngl this isn’t how Rebecca acts. Sure, she’s impulsive but definitely not like this.
What he didn't expect, was a naked Rebecca to join him, standing there with her fist clenched, her face a storm. - Month9mthReplied to Dao_Master_Penguin
- Month9mthReplied to Shin_Senpai
Don’t feel bad, you are right. I don’t understand why the other guy seems to to not understand what you are saying. It most likely because of what happens in the story that’s got him upset. But objectively a review is not created and used for personal opinions. That would simply make it an opinion instead of a review. When writing a review on WN it literally gives you key outlines to rate based on what you have read. For instance, writting quality, updating stability, story development, etc. Either the other guy simply don’t know what a review is, or is simply being ignorant because he is upset of the content presented in this story. I should also mention that I have not read this fanfic nor plan to.
- Month9mthReplied to Lukas_KrappCh 7 A Textbook of Pokémon
- Month9mthReplied to ReviewOverseer
- Month9mthReplied to Ruckducker
A necessary plot instrument.
The Low-Born Maid II - Month1yrCommentedCh 1 Reincarnation
- Month1yrCommentedCh 1 Reincarnation
- Month1yrReplied to Lukas_KrappCh 61 [Bonus chapter] Accused (Part 2)
- Month1yrReplied to TheRainMaker_Yama
No
[Aeternus Lacerta Hatchling: Eternal Lizard Hatchling. High agility, bites are venomous and the tail is dangerous. Usually found in The Crypt Pits and the first Stratum of the Great Aeternus Labyrinth] - Month1yrReplied to Black_Cat2004Ch 59 Accused (Part 1) Re-edited)
- Month1yrReplied to Krombopulos
Yeah. There's that & the fact that I have been taken off of the seasonal rankings for some unknown reason. I think this novel may have been lowkey shadowbanned. It’s one of the reasons I’m planning on releasing another novel soon. Just working out the rough edges since I want that story to be more put together than this one.
Ch 59 Accused (Part 1) Re-edited) - Month1yrReplied to Hannibal_1996
On my screen it says "he could hear". Webnovel is just glitched.
As he dug a hole big enough for him to fit into he could here the mumbles of the humans growing louder, this angered him even more than having to leave his cave.