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    Replied to VenerableChingchow

    You’re talking about Noblesse? Yeah, I stopped the updates recently because of its lack of engagement. Though this could easily be explained with how little chapters are released currently, with my experience in writing within WN, it could be either or. Another reason for my absence is because I have been working on another fanfic in substitute of Noblesse.

    She pulled him down, leaning back against his car as she kissed him once more. This time it didn't have the fire from earlier at the range, it was softer and slower, it escalating into a full french kiss as she let David play with her tongue, his hands on her waist as he lifted her a bit, pressing her into the car.
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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    Commented

    Alright. AU or not, this is simply not Rebecca. From this point on I’ll just read with no brain.

    She pulled him down, leaning back against his car as she kissed him once more. This time it didn't have the fire from earlier at the range, it was softer and slower, it escalating into a full french kiss as she let David play with her tongue, his hands on her waist as he lifted her a bit, pressing her into the car.
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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    Replied to Sir_Squirrel

    Exactly lol. I assume it’s just because the author wants to establish a close relationship between David, Rebecca, and V, making this some some sort of father, mother, daughter thing. Still can’t help but cringe at the unrealisticness though.

    Rebecca cursed beneath her breath as she stormed into the basement.
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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    Replied to BeaulenSmith2

    Interesting. Even you don’t understand why you made her cry.

    After a few minutes of silence, she said quietly. ''If you tell anyone I cried over that, I'll ice you.''
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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    Commented

    Again, not the way Rebecca would react to this situation. I can see her feeling bad for the girl, but crying? For real? She didn’t even cry when her brother died. I feel like you are creating scenes for a quick relationship boost between the two.

    Hiccuping slightly as David pulled her forward, hugging her to his chest as he simply sat there beneath the hot water while holding her as she cried.
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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    Commented

    Ngl this isn’t how Rebecca acts. Sure, she’s impulsive but definitely not like this.

    What he didn't expect, was a naked Rebecca to join him, standing there with her fist clenched, her face a storm.
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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    Replied to Dao_Master_Penguin

    Actually, you are the wrong one here.

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    Replied to Shin_Senpai

    Don’t feel bad, you are right. I don’t understand why the other guy seems to to not understand what you are saying. It most likely because of what happens in the story that’s got him upset. But objectively a review is not created and used for personal opinions. That would simply make it an opinion instead of a review. When writing a review on WN it literally gives you key outlines to rate based on what you have read. For instance, writting quality, updating stability, story development, etc. Either the other guy simply don’t know what a review is, or is simply being ignorant because he is upset of the content presented in this story. I should also mention that I have not read this fanfic nor plan to.

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    Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity
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    Replied to Lukas_Krapp

    I just lost interest in it for the time being. I plan on coming back around at some point.

    Ch 7 A Textbook of Pokémon
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    Pokémon: Noblesse
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    Replied to ReviewOverseer

    As always, a very thorough and detailed review. I appreciate it.

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    Pokémon: Noblesse
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    Replied to Ruckducker

    A necessary plot instrument.

    The Low-Born Maid II
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    Pokémon: Noblesse
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    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Reincarnation
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    I created Magic!
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    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 1 Reincarnation
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    I created Magic!
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    Replied to Heavenly_Supreme

    I’m definitely not dropping the story, my life is just a bit compacted at the moment. Im gonna drop a chapter soon

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    A Cold-Blooded POV
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    Replied to Lukas_Krapp

    It’s not dropped. Dw

    Ch 61 [Bonus chapter] Accused (Part 2)
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    A Cold-Blooded POV
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    Replied to TheRainMaker_Yama

    No

    [Aeternus Lacerta Hatchling: Eternal Lizard Hatchling. High agility, bites are venomous and the tail is dangerous. Usually found in The Crypt Pits and the first Stratum of the Great Aeternus Labyrinth]
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    A Cold-Blooded POV
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    Replied to Black_Cat2004

    Yes.

    Ch 59 Accused (Part 1) Re-edited)
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    A Cold-Blooded POV
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    Replied to Krombopulos

    Yeah. There's that & the fact that I have been taken off of the seasonal rankings for some unknown reason. I think this novel may have been lowkey shadowbanned. It’s one of the reasons I’m planning on releasing another novel soon. Just working out the rough edges since I want that story to be more put together than this one.

    Ch 59 Accused (Part 1) Re-edited)
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    A Cold-Blooded POV
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    Replied to Hannibal_1996

    On my screen it says "he could hear". Webnovel is just glitched.

    As he dug a hole big enough for him to fit into he could here the mumbles of the humans growing louder, this angered him even more than having to leave his cave.
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    A Cold-Blooded POV
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    Replied to TamMaster

    I’m confused. Did you just rate the book in third person? Like, your literally talking about yourself here lmao

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    The Destiny (Book 1 in The Master Chronicles)
    Fantasy · TamMaster
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