i have been reading it for the second time until last uploaded chap. there are things that confuses me. but still this ff has a lot of potential. please continue it, dont mind the negative comments. there is a reason this novel is a FANFICTION it means anything is possible.

the original protag is out. the one inside the pearl is a different person. the way the story was written is like a summary very fast paced. but where is the vermilion bird tho. i like it tho. I'd like to elaborate more for the author but this is a completed ff already soooo. this review is for the readers.

grunt: young master use rock smash

grunt: young master use rock smash

woah. that's the whole plot. right there. well. we all saw that coming. what do you expect from an OP character? the author did this to make us curious and read how would the bad guys die. it's a given that they would die tho. this is not the first novel/ff we've read with the tag op mc.

it's por****

Yeaahhhhhhh. cringe 😬

Wow. Just. Wow. Even i believe that there is a limit. But who am i to judge. i commend the author for the effort. I like read stories with such tags. but. this story is TOO MUCH. The world is not ready for this. This story is not for me. Good luck to you author-san.

writing quality: i dont know how to describe it really but it's dull in my opinion. Story development: there are things that were not explained, small things really and it's hard to follow the story because of it's setting (probably because it's AU and not the norm FF that we know e.g. reincarnation or transmigration). Character design: the author clearly wants to portray a Dark Au of Naruto but it's a bad mix of dark elements while characters are just pushovers. plus the weirdness of genderbend characters(sorry for offending those with genderbend fetish but personally not for me) even if the shemale orochimaru is not a "used goods" i would still not read. i thought that there is another snake in this ff. update stability: the ff is done. probably because this ff is already complete from other sites. World background: Naruto AU. Genderbend Snake sage. Good guy Damio(?). Read it. or not. it's your choice.

nope. i am dropping this ff. its not for me