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“Ed…ward? Wanna play?”
The translator is straight up garbage. The story itself is decent, it’s a direct rip off of attack on titan, but that doesn’t take away from the fact that it’s a good story. But the translator is entirely killing the vibe of the whole book, I have to drop the story, because it’s impossible to follow. Literally 4 copy pasted stories in a row, then it directly jumps ahead by like 3 chapters. If Webnovel assigned a different translator to fix this mess, I’d pick it up again, but this translator is, without a doubt, the laziest translator I’ve come across on this platform
I’m stil at a loss, why doesn’t he distribute the manual for training the 10th dragon. I’m assuming the people in the first sect didnt have a talent for cultivation, if he let the manuals loose on those of the 9 dragon sect, given a better talant, and infinite resorces in comparison, they could easily train it to level 50 and achieve a 10th dragon
I feel like the author forgets his own story at times. He forgets about the two other dragons that mike has, the level he sets the creatures at, and now, he forgot entirely about the fact that he already destroyed an enemy castle right when the protection period ended. I love the story, it just needs better continuinity. Keep notes if it helps or something, because it’s putting me off bad, and I doubt I’m the only one. You even keep the side arc‘s interesting, it’s a very unique idea for a story, there’s bound to be rip-offs for this story coming in the future, the best way to keep ahead of your own plot, is to work on perfecting it. I’d really hate to see this book pushed to the back burner due to being surpassed by it’s own cheep imitations. But like I said, I love this story, and I really look forward to seeing how it progresses