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I know Author is new to writing story and I can see it in early chapters and I can see the improvement from chapter 1 to chapter 73 but still something is missing in this fanfic. Maybe the characters isn't that flesh out? or the style of writing is kinda average? I don't know. But when I compare this to 'The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima' The story becomes kinda pale, I hope the author take some tips or inspiration from other successful story or fanfic and try to improve the story and his writing style. I am giving this 5 star because I like this fanfic very much and I hope the author improves and continue to make good chapters.
she was the uchiha girl who was saved by daichi in chapter 69.
It didn't come off as cringe or edgy. In my point of view, If a person who is close to you is kidnapped and only one person know of her whereabout and he is not telling you no matter how much you plea to him then what will you do? you have to take some drastic measures to save him or her right? i think he (mc) is just emotional and really want to save those two quickly before they die. So it made sense why would he do that, it didn't come off as cringe to me.
I totally forgot she existed😅
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