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I know Author is new to writing story and I can see it in early chapters and I can see the improvement from chapter 1 to chapter 73 but still something is missing in this fanfic. Maybe the characters isn't that flesh out? or the style of writing is kinda average? I don't know. But when I compare this to 'The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima' The story becomes kinda pale, I hope the author take some tips or inspiration from other successful story or fanfic and try to improve the story and his writing style. I am giving this 5 star because I like this fanfic very much and I hope the author improves and continue to make good chapters.

(Kaito)

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