matheus_eric
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mixed, because if you want to put people in the harem who are not from doulou and just say that the plot has not started and put them to stay together.
Do you have an estimate for when you will post the chapters?
one question, are you just going to translate or are you going to try to write the rest of the fic because the original was abandoned a long time ago
I don't think you should take away the store just because of one for all, there's no reason to take one away from the other if you're afraid of ruining the story with the products and just limit the amount of points he earns per run in the dungeon now that even the dungeon itself already has a limit, because if you're going to remove the store, it's better not to introduce it beforehand. (Google translate)
I think the MC's place in the league will be against real threats and not with criminals on the street, because against threats the MC can let go because you yourself say that when the league goes to war they don't care about these things and with this premise, I think it's the perfect place for the MC and when it's not there it suits him more training and I know slice of life I don't know if you'll focus on that
I think it's good so far, in my opinion I recommend not paying too much attention to the other 4 that came with him when they face each other, especially if the MC is op because it gets annoying when they go back and forth without resolving where the MC can't kill them and they stay behind, it gets boring